NO this was way too sad!!

LOL> it was beautiful! Athrun and Yzak are ment to be!!

there so cute togehter... you manged to caputere the feelings in this one0shot and thats good...

it was really sad...

keep un wrting!

I've been sifting through all your SEED fanfics, and I think you've touched upon every slash couple in there. But this one... KYA! Athrun/Yzak is my absolute favorite pairing EVER! I bow to you. And you're right, I felt the same way. At first it doesn't seem to make sense, but after you think about it... Gods, they make the most amusing, best couple out there. And you capture Yzak perfectly. Gah, don't you just love his character?! *giggles madly* He's so much fun to play with in fanfiction.

Wow, this story was pretty dark. But then I liked that bit of light at the end. And the whole theme of the melting was intriguing. Nicely done.

Sup? Remember me? HOW THE HELL CAN YOU WRITE STORIES LIKE THIS! I CRYED MORE WITH THIS ONE THAN THE LAST ONE! YOUR ENGLISH/L.A. MARKS MUST BE %110! I bet someday you'll be a famouse author!! This was...I don't know how to even put this...shit...uh...Awsome?No No better than that...uh...KUSO! Oh well this was beyond Aswome...I swear if you keep this up you will be by far my favorite author!! Oh and one more think... you give such good detail...I could almost see this.

Later!
P.S. I have and order for you...KEEP UP THIS AWSOME WORK I'M DYING FOR YOUR NEXT STORY!! ^_~

". . . lips still rosy with the imprint of a kiss. . ."

That was confusing at first . . . but it was gorgeous, of course. Amazing writing. But why so much angst? I'm glad for the happy-ish ending, though, for I know I would be in tears if the story continued so sadly much longer. I love Yzak. He never gets what he wants, what he deserves, even though he does not know how to take it, he needs human contact just as much as every soldier.

E!! ^^

At first reading this, I had mixed feelings. I couldn't decide if I liked it or not. But somewhere around

"The song was falling, and slowly, shame began to burn in his gut; the awful climax to an awful tune. And then, silence. The song died as quickly as it had been born, but the quietness was now ringing as loudly as the noise had.

“You…bastard…”"

I decided you were doing an AMAZING job with your fic *__* I had no idea it would be Athrun/Yzak (or Yzak/Athrun? The ending seemed kind of ambigious) until it became obvious. XD

-coughs- About the ending.

It /was/ ambigious but it was WONDERFULLY ambigious. *_* Not ambigious in the horrible "What just happened?" way but ambigious in the "zomg that was amazingly haunting" way.

You own you rock etc etc. You make me want to write Athrun/Yzak (them being my OTP y'know =D) so I'll stop rambling now.

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Beautiful. *pauses for emphasis* I mean, sincerely beautiful. There's meaning in what Yzak feels, the chaos of pain and confusion. Intricate, detailed writing at its best - thank you for this jewel.

And now...fangirl-mode...Ah fluff! XD Sweet moments, frail and fleeting.

Although I wonder...Athrun's gone? Truly?

U r very discriptive.
I liked.
But that 'take me instead' thing, does this mean Athrun's dead?!
. . .
Okay.
Well, keep the fics comin'!

Ath/Yza rulz!

Aw, that's so cute! And here I thought Yzak hated Athrun...oh wait...* scratches back of head sheepishly* It's a story! Lol, glad to see your still alive girl! *grins* And thanks for the recent review, I couldn't help start laughing, and no worries about Chandra/Alex, I'm getting around to that *confused/ annoyed face* I've got a bit of writers block--again! It plagues me! *dramatic sigh* But you're right when you sense a coupleish there. *smirks* But...nah, I'll leave that hanging, just to drive you mad! *evil grin* Great one-shot, ya really like them don't you? *tilts head* By the way, do you have an AIM at all?? Just curious, I recently got one, and its amazing how easier it is to use than say MSN or Yahoo...*grumbles* But...hey I'm rambling...wow...is any of this related to your oneshot?? *looks up* yup, there's a tiny bit...I should really stop here...god knows you're laughing at me. *mock glares* Anyways...*whistles* hopefully I'll have a go at PCE and get something...Chandra and Alex are my favourite scenes right now. Ahh...young love...wish I had a guy...*pouts* meh, I'm still young...though my sister does say I scare males off...*thoughful look* I'll have to fix that...
Okay, off track again. My AIM is ChaoticPhoenix18 in case you're interested...andd...good luck? lol, just for anything, really don't ask me, I'm in a weird mood right now...
As if you haven't all ready guessed...
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