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Twilight Chi
2006-02-20 . chapter 15
yay!chapter 15 was great!you make wonderful fanfics!!^-^
sakura546
2005-11-12 . chapter 14
i love this fan fic.!keep up the good work!please continue!!^_^
Kazunii
2005-10-08 . chapter 1
I really like this story. Don't give up writing. I have complete faith in you. I really do!
Jye
2005-10-07 . chapter 13
This fanfic is GREAT! >_<
I'll be waiting for the next and next and next and next(x 100)... CHAPTER, till the end!
I love the way you wrote it as first person's view, and all the detailed discription!

I'm just a rookie at writing fanfic, you're my IDOL!
I also have a fanfic on ToS, on this site that I just posted, but I suck... orz.
AngelicCrossplay
2005-09-13 . chapter 11
I didn't do that side quest so I never knew. Anyways great chapter please update soon!
AngelicCrossplay
2005-09-08 . chapter 10
I liked this so far! SOrry for not reviewing last chapter, I didn't get to read it until just now. Anyways really good... But I didn't expect Yuan to be engaged to Martel... Ech... neways please update soon!
BlacknessChaos
2005-09-05 . chapter 10
Your story is pretty good.

I look foward to seeing how it meshes with the whole war situation.
nightfire
2005-09-05 . chapter 10
great fic. keep it up!
ShinRa Associate
2005-09-05 . chapter 5
Yay!
I'm lost and found, I was lost, and now I'm found.
ShinRa Associate
2005-09-05 . chapter 2
This story is really good so far! Don't worry 'bout the first chapter and me not reviewing. I wait 'till the second one to do it. You rule!
Sticky Wins
2005-09-05 . chapter 10
Oh, sorry for not reviewing in such a long time. You where posting chapters so quickly, and i didn't have much time to review (school started for me too). XP I've been reading though.

Anyway, it's good. However, maybe #876407 needs a name. That might be fun. ~^_^~ Keep it up!
Sticky Wins
2005-09-02 . chapter 9
Pretty good. The chapters are a little short, but it's good other wise. Keep it up!
AngelicCrossplay
2005-08-31 . chapter 8
Good chapter... A bit short though... Anyways, please update soon!
AngelicCrossplay
2005-08-30 . chapter 7
I liked this chapter a lot! Yah, romance would be cool ^_~. Anyways please update soon!
Sanosuke.Cigara
2005-08-29 . chapter 7
good story. can't wait to see how the comming chapters are.
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