You know it'd be awfully nice if you updated. :] I got off hiatus a month ago and have been meaning to review, but got distracted. C'mon, I thought you'd have updated by now. Pretty please, with KaiHil-ness on top. lol
It's gonna be 3 years in July! Hasn't this been enough time!O_o Pretty please. I'm on my knees, I'm on my nose. Please. After all this begging, for so long, it'd be awfully nice if you'd update this, and not kill of Hilary or at least, let Kai not get together with those 2 bitches who's names escape me now. The two sisters, one of who kissed Kai. Kai belongs with Hiromi and Hiromi alone. Hmph.
C'mon...!
And hey, wasn't this in the romance genre before?
Oh, and if you intend on quitting this, which I sincerely hope you're not, please inform, so I can stop hoping. :)
Laterz... update soon.
kaihil lover
PS: I signed out to review, cause I'd reviewed all 22 chapters before, see the devoted-ness of the fans of your story. And update for the love of that at least.
Dude! Dude, dude dude! PLEASE for GOD'S SAKE UPDATE THIS F***ING STORY! I'm DYING here right now! Please! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! In the name of all the penguins of the world, and in the name of my doggy, PLEASE update this ASAP...
Seriously, I've tried reading this for two years...I could NOT bring myself to read it. It's been in my bookmarks for ages but every time I tried to read it, I'd start feeling like crying so I'd stop. Now that angst doesn't move me anymore, I FINALLY went past the first two chapters and sat downt o read the entire fic...It still made me so freaking sad afterwards. And I seriously wanna read more, PLEASE update. I'm begging you here...!
I feel dead, this is the last chappy and so many questions have been left unanswered i feel sick, m insides are threatening to come outside, i keep forgetting this is just a story, how can u leave it like this, first is Hiromi dead or alive, grandma Yuuki said whatever happens to Romi Tai shouldn't act like that, that means she is alive and did Kai meet Hiromi in a dream and when he was i the hospital right now when the doc said it would be like taking his breath away if he old him to leave was this scene on the day of when they disconnected her and it was written Kai's breathing was more than hers and hers was none so is she dead or not and in the authors note it was how this happened relates with Hilary telling Kai Dranzer was worried about him but i don't get how that relates with any of this and what about Grandpa Nicholas and his mysterious friend whom I think is Voltaire or Kai's dad and who wants forgiveness from someone whom he thinks won't forgive him. There are so many questions and I'm so anxious to know th e answers please update this story for the love of God, the Earth , all that is good, sane descent in this world and Kaihil, update this story.
First of all way glad for the Tai ass kicking he was getting out of hand. Second, I think his friend is either Voltaire or Sasumo which I think i read on Wikipedia is the name of Kai's father, and the person who won't forgive him is Kai. Now the question of the millennium IS HIROMI DEAD? She was disconnected right so shouldn't she have died why did grandma Yuuki say "Whether Hiromi goes or stays is not in our hands and it is not our right to point fingers and accuse others." Does that mean even after being disconnected there's a chance of her living, she's not dead yet? Oh Go let it be so, let her wake up.
What the fuck just happened, I don't get it first of all you haven't based this on 'without you' by hinder have you cause then it would have a sad ending because in the song the lyrics are "i didn't wanna believe in this but it all worked out in the end as I watch you walk away, yeah, I never though I'd say, I'm fine without you!" HE CAN'T BE FINE WITHOUT HER.
Now to chapter again what in God's name happened first a girl first just kisses Kai then another slaps him and he just lets them do every thing they want wait Misako was the 1 who kissed him but the girl who challenged him to a battle and who slapped him was Lynn right? Then did Nicholas go to see the friend he had to patch up with and if he did was that friend Voltaire and what how did it have every thing to do with his grand dauhter as in Hiromi? Next did Hiromi just die, please don't tell me she died but what about that scene that happened in the last chappy i distinctly remember that Kai dreamt of Hilary and she said she can't comeback but I don't remember Kai mentioning to her that she was dead. How could they disconnect her, why did the guys allow it shouldn't they have some rights here, and what did Tyson knew, it was written that Tyson had discovered it as soon as the petals fell as soon as the Tai had uttered those resentful words, what did he knew? How could you kill Hiromi, this chappy was really confusing and sad.
Kai was right to love and to care only hurts you but sadly you can't stop loving and caring unfortunately it's human nature! Speaking of CS Lewis, I just saw Narnia 3best movie ever.
This was a really sad chappy, I really felt sorry for Daichi for the 1st time I fell I actually liked the kid, the fact about every 1 forgetting Hiromi because she didn't beyblade really made me cry and he would remember and tell them his win was for her was just so sad, the poor kid. the tournament shouldn't be held how could they hold the tournament when Romi died, heartless jerks.
"Perhaps our eyes need to be washed by our tears once in a while, so that we can see Life with a clearer view again."
Again many parts of this review which are as follows:
a: The starting few line were they between Kai and Marina cause, it was mentioned about Art and someone kissing some one and then it abruptly started with Gina so was it Gina's conversation only the starting few lines or between Kai and Marina.
b: I feel so bad for Gina that she never go to tell her baby siter how much she loved her, I think I'l call my sister and tell her how much I love her.
c: Misako should realize that Kai is in love with Hiromi and the kiss was just a spur of the moment thingy and the whole team loves her an the two of them could never replace her.
d: HE SHOD GIVE UP BEYBLADING. If it took away the life of some one he cared of he should quit at least this shows he did care for her.
a: The Christmas family thing was sweet when they were reminiscing about Hiromi, that was cute.
b: Tai and Freya should go jump in a lake.
c: The twin witches should realize that the guys have known them for a few months they have other people they love, know and care for much more and would like to spend time with, even if they weren't invited to Hiromi's, if the saint shields or Psychics had invited them they would have gone to their place because obviously they have history and they are more closer and older friends.
d:How does Romi's grandpa know Kai's last name, did he know Voltaire or Sasumo (that's the name of Kai's dad right, not sure though.)if he did, did he had some bad relations with them as he said he wanted to patch things with old friends. It would be funny if he knew the grand father of the boy his grand daughter liked and was in the same team with and who was mildly responsible for her current condition.
e:They can't disconnect her! (
f: HE KISSED HER! The unfaithful, heartless bastard, he totally replaced her, if some one dies you just replace them with some one else just because they look like them to you, ahhhhhhhhhhh the heartless loser.
g: For the love of God update this fic, I think i'll go crazy thinking about what happened if you don't give an ending!
That was nice of Kai to buy a present for Romi, though the jerk face could be a bit more enthusiastic about it, It is obvious he liked d wait likes her, expressing wouldn't kill him, beside why does the witch care it's obvious he doesn't like her back he's buying a gift for some other girl so obviously he doesn't care.
That was so sad when Tyson said he's struggling with some things and then Kenny said that weren't they all, I piTy for them so much.
MAN THESE 2 HRS OF NOT READING THIS STORY WERE TORTURE, I TRIED TO WATCH GLEE, COULDN'T CONCENTRATE, KEPT THINKING OF HIROMI IN A HOSPITAL BED, then started watching old eps of 8 simple rules for dating my teenage daughters, man that brought back good memories, it was such a cool show, but now i can finally read again.
Please update this story and finish it and get Kai and Hiromi together. I'm obsessed.
She would obviously be hurt if no not if when she wakes up and sees that every 1 even Kai every 1 except Daichi has replaced her with the twin witches, hey twin witches, twitches i loved that movie Tia and Tamera Mowry were so awesome in that movie, Oh and when she finds out that Kai is dating one of the 2 witches, well he kissed her so they might be together, she'd be so hurt cause i's kind of obvious that she likes him.
Again I read the chapter, i couldn't get my self to stop reading but i'm watching glee now and not reading this story for at least an hr.
How dare she think she could get together with Kai when Hiromi is alive or barely alive or in a vegetative state or whatever she is or even if she was dead how dare she think that and for the 1st time in life i like Daichi, Daichi the monkey boy better than every 1 as he's the only not replacing Hilary and what is Miss Misako's problem if Kai is a t 'her' house, she doesn't even no who 'her' is and if Kai likes 'her' and he does she should not interfere. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Hiromi should just wake up and get together with Kai and a happy ending should be there.
Ok i'm officially obsessed now i think i'm gonna stop reading this and gonna watch 'Glee' to clear my mind and get it of Kai and Hiromi.
Ahhhhhhhhh, how dare they, they are trying to replace Hiromi, those ungrateful heartless, f***ing pieces of cow shit, how dare they think they could replace HIROMI with those 2 witches, 2 months, 2 months had only passed and they god damn replace her, so much for their lives stopping with her death and kai dieing when Hirimo fell when he replaced her. , iF THEY ACTUALLY EXISTEED AND this story was real i would have gone to Bakuten and killed them that is if they weren't an anime characters.
Please update this story and get Hiromi to wake p and get her together with Kai and make them all apologize to her for trying to replace her with those 2 witches and Kai for actually kissing 1 of the 2 witches.
Poor Kai, this is so sad, I mean thinking 'bout her all the time, oh why doesn't she just wake up. On a brighter note it's the second day of spring break, wohohooooooooo and second day since my exams have been over, curse u physics and French. Hiromi, for god'd sake wake up.
For the love of God, all that is good, sane and decent and the pairing kaihil update this damned story!
That was yet again devastatingly, yes again sad. tai is a huge jerk, i no he' sad but it's not the guys' fault OH AND IF MEMORY SERVES SHE'S IN ALL THE PICS, SHE WAS in the pic after the 2n world champs in the pic of the team which is shown at the ending of the theme of the 3rd season she's there standing right next to kai giving a peace sign the 1 which shoes the whole bba revolution team for the 3rd season she's always there and they do care for her and kai did save her wneh he COULD like in season 2 he saved her twice dis ti,me he couldnt if it was possible he would have obviousy, tai was being a jerk.
How in hell did he do it, go tho the house of the family whose daughter he had gotten killed not really though and it wasn't his fault but still in a messed up twisted up way it was kind of teeny weeny like needle in a hay stack way his fault, not really but he as captain was responsible wait again with the doctor not being responsible for the patients life thing, oh god i'm being stupid, fine, it wasn't his fault but he and the others think it is and going to the house of the family who think that you have killed their daughter, sister, grand daughter or whatever, how did he do that and especially when u r such an anti people person. The whole scene when he was dreaming was so sad an when he thought he'd be damned before he let her go again, poor kai, poor hiromi.
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