   Mirai-Pan4 12/2/02 . chapter 1Wow, You're a cool writer! I wish I could write like you!
V. Cool! |
| Queen000 10/21/02 . chapter 1 eya! that was only one chapter? How long will the other chapters be?
DBZ Fanfiction Queen |
| Firebird234 6/11/02 . chapter 1 Come on please update please. |
| reeko 5/6/02 . chapter 1 finish the story!w |
| iMNoaNge 4/3/02 . chapter 1 ur not gonna update the story is it? |
| kc 3/27/02 . chapter 1 Wonderful story but when are you going to update? You're litterally killling me! |
| storyteller 11/28/01 . chapter 1 I loved this story!
It was so believeable!
and I liked the way you kept it so close to what happened in the cartoon.
Keep up the good work and write more! |
| madoka0013 11/21/01 . chapter 1 its been about a year when the hell! r u gonna get the second chapter up! by the way great story |
| moonraven 10/26/01 . chapter 1 Bwaaaaahaaaaa! I love the paragraph with the sacrificial animal! LOL Goodjob! |
| Mademoiselle 9/27/01 . chapter 1 *Sigh* I absolutely love it! Please contact me if you decide to write more! |
| Fayvin 9/20/01 . chapter 1 Great! Please Continue! |
| mousey7891 9/14/01 . chapter 1 very good i loved it can't wait for the next chappys well untill next time keep up the good writing
trunksgurl |
| Vegge's Mate 9/9/01 . chapter 1 Very cool fic. It was nice how you intergrated Vegeta and Bulma's thoughts during the situation of Mirai Trucks having to rescue his mom and Chibi Trucks. That was cute. Poor Vegeta, though...I wonder why the future Bulma had lied. Perhaps in the alternative time zone Vegeta wasn't the same as he is in this one. Well I can't wait to read the next chapter. _ |
| Isis angel 8/31/01 . chapter 1 I love it, you manager to make it realistic and keep to the story line and keep their love intact...you're a genius! I want the next chapter and i want it SOON! |
| maroger1 7/24/01 . chapter 1 when is the nexy chapter gonna come out |
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