Now that they're a canon couple you just have to add to the story. They are just an awesome couple and this was very well written.

woah.

you're 14? woah. you're writing is really, really great.

anyway, i'm guessing that she's with george, right? and that they can't be together because they don't want to hurt fred? interesting. good. very good.

even though there's no dialouge, the writing keeps you entranced.

once again, great job.

angelface04

...any reason why they CAN'T? ; As far as I can tell, no one has a problem with dating...

Loved it!

i loved the stroy. i like the mystery behind the man and this whole love affair