I'm faving this so I can go back to it for further analysis. I thought the poetry was beautiful, but I have a feeling I've missed too much... it might be something you have to sort of absorb. Really interesting,though. Thanks for writing.

Amazing. :D

Okay, here's my deal; I thought the use of the poem was completely BRILLIANT.

...But I'll admit that I didn't catch all the meanings of it. So I'm still a little confused about what all went on in Sasuke's past. But hey, maybe that's what you were going for.

Like I said, fantastic placement of the poem. Very cool.

Naruto's kid-honest attitude and the emphasis on the italics reminds me of Holden from Catcher in the Rye.

...which is a good thing. :P

Wow that was really good The poem was amazing truly amazing! Thank you so much for writing this *favourites*

~Fayte

confusing. the flow was kind wacked. you should make sure to make the break in scenes distict. but all in all, not bad.

The characters and their pasts are magnifique; you can sense how truly /**-up/ they really are, even though they do everyday things and have every day reactions. Both of them are truly twisted and depressed, despite being /regular people/.

that poem at the end is amazing; it flows and tells a tale that breaks the heart in two. It's beautiful in ways that are rarely expressed, and it's rather...hm, enrapturing that you used a poem to convey Sasuke's past, which again only serves to highlight how ** up he really is.

The pasts suit the characters, just as the characters suit the settings.

Beautiful, beautiful. Thanks for taking the time to write.

I really enjoyed that.
Not much criticsm;
just praise.
But too much of it to write in a review, so instead I'll just applaud you for your amazing piece of text.
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ah, love! I love the structure. It's perfect after any kind of day so I'm definitely rereading this when I have the time! Thanks for writing :D

Wow... This story was...so messed up. Nevertheless, it was a good story. XD

really well done...love the style! I know it's kindda late for a review, but I kindda found this story when I was browsing...I just had to praise it!

That was... deep... i guess to say in the least. I love the poem at the end. It was very well written and I can see that you probably spent a very long time on this. I must know, what inspired this fiction? Like, how did you get the idea? The characters are exelently portrayed. Keep up the good work.

oh wow... that was so...i dont know.

but it was, to say the least, incredibul...lol that is spelled so wrong...
but still, very nice

uhm...? like i don't really get it. kidding kidding! i like it alot it's very deep. quick Q. did NAruto have an accent?

ok, that was REALLY something! i love it! BRAVO! i just wanna tell u somethimg : U CAN WRITE !! really awsome work, i really was enjoying all time reading it ^_^