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Reviews for: A Ranko’s Bet Fan Fiction: Sailor Jurai - Page 1 of 4
sin.nighthawk
2009-11-13 . chapter 1
this is good plz keep working on it
Kapola Nuva
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
Why did you stop!! T-T
*runs off into the corner to cry*
FluffyNevyn
2009-09-11 . chapter 1
*sigh* Such an amazing beginning. You sir, have talent, in spades even. I wish you had continued this story, but well...if wishes were fishes and all. Just thought id put in my 1/50th of a dollar.
Jimbobob5536
2009-07-05 . chapter 1
Very amusing story.
steelfist7
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
please continue it's awsome!
elrail
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
please add more to this cool story
bsmitty
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
Great fic! I really enjoy neko-Ranma fics, and its hard to find a good one. Id say this may be one of the best! I await for your continuation.

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Blackdex
2007-11-16 . chapter 1
please continue.
Rose1948
2007-08-23 . chapter 1
*gigglefits* CUTE! Any chance of continuation?
WyndRyder
2007-08-03 . chapter 1
Is tis story gong to be continued? I'm a Fan of Cat like Ranma story
Tama Saga
2007-07-31 . chapter 1
I don't like how you characterize Tsunami. She's lacking optimism. A great deal of it.

I don't like how you characterize Ranma. You're making him out to be someone that needs to be led by the hand.

Good use of logic and setup. But, your story feels bulky from time to time. The only thing I can think of is the really large paragraphs that frequently pop up.

finials -> finals
Ultimate Randomidity
2007-04-23 . chapter 1
You've got a good and creative idea going here. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing while reading the cat girl part. Ever going to update? Because I'd really like to read more of this fic.
Ambiguous Inexplicable Enigma
2007-04-19 . chapter 1
Exceptional piece of work here.
Highly innovative and amusing.

I have absolutely no idea where this is going. One of the few pieces of work that I'm clueless as to what direction it's heading, making for an amazing fic.

Can we ever expect an update? If so, how soon?
SSJ Guyver1
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
I decided to give one of your own stories a once over since you so,... harshly,... blew mine off. I have to say though, I wasn't impressed. It's a constantly cliche'd idea in the Fanfiction world, and it's kinda sad that another story has been claimed by it.

Your overall writing wasn't bad, at all in fact. But your grammar could use a lot of work before I would call it excellent. Also, you seemed to switch between Moose and Mousse whenever you talked about him.

That aside, this isn't really Ranma,... this is, much like my own idea, your own take on how you want Ranma to be. I did sense quite a bit of him in there, but it essentially was NOT Ranma. At least not the Ranma from the Anime / Manga. I believe it could be the Ranma from other fanfiction, but not Takahashi's.
LiYinBlake
2006-10-02 . chapter 1
Update soon?
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