It's been so long since i've read a yaoi fic between Mokuba and Seto. It's usually Seto and Jou, you know? Well, I'll finish the rest later but it's good so far! I love it!

I acyually started reading this years ago but never finished it. Now, I'm glad I did! Will most definitely read the sequel.

Darcy-Girl

i've been reading this for the past 3 days, and i have to say i absolutely loved it!

the storey was gripping and had a nice soft landing!

9th chapter is as far as I could make it in one sitting. I'll be back though! I'm eager to see where this leads. Yes, yes, there's a bit of Ooc-ness in Mokuba and Seto, but who cares?!?
I'm only allowed to complain if I think I could write them better than you do and...well, I can't.
Not the biggest fan of tabloidshipping in the universe, (prideship!) but I couldn't help reading this one. You guys are too damn good at writing.
Cheers.

awsome

AWESOME! Great story! Loved it! Amazing job! I shall now go read the sequal lol

So cute!
I can just see Mokuba's hair now!

Cute!!

I adore this! Well-written tabloidshipping is hard to come by (especially on but you've definitely done it. Your style is lovely! ^-^

One critique I'll make is that you tend to refer to the characters as "the brunette" and suchlike. I know that it can be hard to avoid those things, but they're frequently used in PWPs and awful writing, so they seem rather out of place in your story.
I don't mean to offend you with my comment, I'm just thinking it could be helpful.

This is why I'll never catch up...-FG

I finally got around to reading the next chapter! But I'm still so so so so so far behind.-FG

Hm... I know I was warned but Mokuba particularly is getting OOC. Really OOC, Seto... not as bad given the circumstances. It'll be nice to see some plot outside of the mansion and Mokubas school. A nice change of scenery for the guys too. It could lead to a lot. Well I can get to that later. Bed time! Its so nice that I dont have to tell you two to update soon, since the stories done! Whee!

(:- Faery Goddyss

Its good that Mokuba got to tell someone about his relationship with Seto. I imagine it can be ** him sometimes more than it can be on Seto. Granted I can see Seto's inner pain as well. Thanks for all the responses to my reviews by the way! You dont have to keep it up, I'll be reviewing nearly every chapter, half because I want to, half because it makes for a handy bookmark as to where I left off. Cant wait to read more!-FG

Thats enough for one night. Now that they're together and all I'm hoping this just wont be one giant lemon. Not against the idea but there should be some plot in there somewhere. Someone finding out about them... that sort of thing. Anyway I have class tomorrow and need that sleep. I'll get back to this story when I can!-FG

11 and 16... well, that's not so bad. But its incest so... meh. I actually never knew how far apart in age Seto and Mokuba were. Is it really five years? This'll be interesting on so many levels as I'm sure you both were aware of when you wrote it. I dont normally read incest, but curiousity got the better of me.-FG