I like the whole idea behind this fic and it's good but you really need to re-read your stuff... or get a beta reader. and at certain points they just seemed really out of character and used words that I've never heard come out of a teenager's mouth in casual conversation. :) Fix it up and it'll be great!

The BEST fic ever! And for once, I'm not being sarcastic!

This was rather...interesting. I'm not certain exactly what the references to Master/Guardian/etc are but I assume it's something of yours I haven't read yet. I still enjoyed it, even without fully understanding everything, since I love a good friendship/utterly non romantic story. I know it's been years since you posted this, but I'm certain you enjoy seeing comments on all fics regardless. It was very, very well done. I might even recommend it to some of my friends who like a good non-romance.

Where do I begin? Your description skills are top-notch. Your characterization is unrivaled. Keep writing.

Wow, that was awesome! You had very vivid imagery, and that was cool how you gave them names like "Master" and "Guardian". That was very sweet, with their friendship, and the relationship with their younger sibs. I was just amazed at how good this is. :)

Wow! Great, wonderful! I love stories where they're friends! MeShelly

what a great story. I really liked how this one panned out.

hi I'm Elanna's friend. I like your stories but I think that Elanna's stories are better.

I read your story, and you want reviews!I want to thank you for reviewing my version of Passion of Fire. I thought you would be really mad at me. I loved that saga! I printed the whole saga! That's how I accurately typed it.You are SO cool! Please read and review the saga: The Uunreal Digidestined.It is of my own making.And please read and review Cinderellamon.It's rather funny. xoxoxoxox!

Wow,I just read your story, I've been so busy working on mine that I didn't read anyone else's but yours caught my eye. VERY COOL! EXCELLENT! AWSOME! If you could please, would you review my story? You seem so good at writing them that you must be good at reviewing too!

Beautiful. To write more than that would not be doing you enough credit.

I LOVE this story. It is GREAT! But, I have one question. If this is after the digidestioned get thier powers, how come Kim wasn't in it?

IT'S LIKE...WOAH! (o-o)

Hey, Nice!

::Again, looks up at the fic:: Tomodachi...sounds like tamagchi ::Feels embaressed:: Ok, anyway ::Takes a deep breath:: THIS FIC IS THE BEST ONE EVER! ::Pants:: Well you get the basic idea. Those two swords... nice touch. 10 out of 5 (Not possible but to me it is)