You can't just stop there! :O I want to know what the note said, what this crucial part is!

*bounces*

In other words, that was a great chapter! :)

whoa! cliffhanger!

im getting mad at snape. he is being a big arsehole. keep it up! FEEL THE SEXUAL TENSION! kidding.

Woah, another awesome chapter! Petale's character is developing well, and I like your portrayal of Snape. His frustration is really well-shown and described here. Looking forward to Chapter 4!

Really good second chapter. Both could have stood alone as one-shots. Very complete story-telling. xo, H

This is excellent! You write extremley well, and you've got Snape down PAT. I can literally see this happening. Please, please update soon?

hahaah i bet theyd make an adorable couple! sorta sad though, how he treats her...

I can't wait to see what you have planned for this! *bounce* You've captured Snape's character perfectly here, I think - it's great!

I tried to review after your first chapter, but it wouldn't let me! But anyway...I love your plot idea so far - some of the concepts you've come up with are amazing, and the idea of the potion mentioned in chapter one is intriguing. Your writing style is excellent, you're developing and introducing characters well...I can't wait for chapter three!

Wow. That was really powerful. xo, H

I echo AnimaticGirl - wow!

*also begs for an update soon*

What a great beginning you have here. I loved your descriptions, I could see everything. Can't wait for the next.

really good. dont really get whats happening just yet- have a clue, but dont know for sure- but im sure ill find out. and im also dying to know who the girl is...

Wow. What can I say...I'm loving this! EVERY idea you've got in here...is brilliant! Your writing style is excellent, you have a strong vocabulary and an excellent store of ideas...if I beg, will you update soon?