great story

It is a good story, very interesting new characters, but way to much of gifts giving.. is it really that important who gave who and what and when? I understand that christmas, brithday, valentine day are every year but come on.. sometimes it seems like whole story is about buing presents. Fortunately not all the time.

While I'm enjoying this story of your's, you have a problem with physics: a three to four foot sword can't cut through something that's about 10 to15 feet thick in one swing! Please at least make it believeable!

just finished your first story now on to read the next one. and boo yah i was right about the six. this was very well written i am insanely cursious as to what your next story will entail and when you be finsihed writing it.

wow great story i can't wait to read the sequel im sure it will be brilliant anyway good job

I like it so far :)

it's very rushed, and some grammatical errors are most definitely there. you need to work on that - and some description and stuff would be really nice.
Hagrid just out and out said he went to Gringotts. Harry should have had to really work at it to get it out of him - it's not believable. Not buying it. sorry.

OMFG!! O.o
I WAS RIGHT!!
O.o
HOLY CRUD-MUFFINS!!
I'M PSHYCIC!! O.o

I thought it would be Rite Skeeter at first, cuz she was broad-jawed (lol it rhymes) but then James wouldn't have been all: OH NO! cuz if it WAS Skeeter, Hames would-a been all: ah, crap. that woman messes EVERYTHING up. lol.
so.
who is she?
hm...
im thinking Amelia Bones... let's see... *clicks next chapter*

>:3 WHOO! GO HAR-RAY!! x3
LOL. Ron's mind is in the gutter... ._.;;
This chappie is... too romance-y for me... but good... I suppose... ._.;;

HA!! xD
LOL.
Harry's all: Yeah... I'll uh... I'll owl yah...
Mr. P: Er... okay then... tell me when u get an "urge"

LOL.

THAT SLIMY GIT OF A MALFOY!! I HATE YOU LEW-CIUS! >:O

ARRGH. I'm gunna... I'm gunna... *makes rude hand gesture*

*BEEP* YOU YOU SON OF A *BEEP* AND GO TO F-*BEEP*-ING HELL DAMIT!! >:O

good

"soon after the event wherein the wizard saved the witch" Does this mean bonds can only form when a woman is saved by a man? Isn't that a little sexist? Or is Hermione thinking of Harry and Ginny's specific case?

I love this fanfic. Now I am going to read the sequel... ;) Trully enjoyed it. =}