...I really wish you had continued this. Heck, I wouldn't mind continueing this...

Having Satoshi be the hero is fun... I've always liked him and Risa together. I also find it interesting when fics have Risa being stretched to a breaking point... Not because I hate her, but because I love that side of her that comes out in those situations. You got some really nice emotions into this. Very nicely written.

God bless,

Tilt

OH MY GOD! I love this story! You did a really good job.

I loved it! I can't wait to read more like this! Good Luck with your other stories!

This is really good )_( I like how you said so much about her in just that little bit :D But question...why was Satoshi out there in the first place? Was he following her or merely out walking (or flying) around? Just curious :D Either way, it's a great story :D

Beautiful. :]

mou! it's so sad, but then so sweet. you've got to continue it! i wanna see satoshi being nurturing for once and not be the one who's so sadistic. plz plz plz continue it! you know, you're on a lotta ppl's favorite lists and i suggest you keep this story on thier lists by continuing it *wink wink*

this was really awesome and sweet...

sweet! second hiwatariand risa fanfic...i really hoped it was longer...i really hope dat you make fanfics dat doesnt really make satoshi ooc too much..got to go ..BIE!

I ABSOULUTLY LOVED IT! the way risa was about to commit suicide (even though knowing she could never do it) and then Satoshi to the rescue... It was great you should wright another. and read and review my stories.

when did you write thisone its awesome! i dont like being out of the loop

*tear. but good fic

Night of white describes both Krad and Dark, doesn't it?

Satoshi with angel wings. Sweet.

Ciao For Now Everyone!

hmm.. im guessing that one shots are just one chapter stories right?(im stupid, sorry _) i like the story, i think it would have been beter if it were longer, but i still think it was good _

keep it up

did i send u one already? aww what the heck. i LOVED it! PLEASE type a chapt.2! many thanx!

LOL! TOTALLY KAWAII!

Yo, your one shot was great! Loved it! Write more SatxRisa one shots, you got me? It was great! Don't worry, I'm sure others will like it ;)