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pacejunkie
2006-03-12 . chapter 1
That was a good character study. If you wanted to you could turn it into a full alternate timeline in which Charlie gives in and uses and then tries to hide it from Claire. That woud be something I'd be interested in reading about. I like how you captured the feel of temptation and Charlie trying to resist. Well done.
Ron Lover6789
2006-02-18 . chapter 1
Wow, that was powerfull. I like it!! It was a perfect hope-giver, that Charlie won't go crazy.
Spoofmaster
2006-02-14 . chapter 1
Aww...hey, a story of yours I didn't read!
Fallon
2005-08-18 . chapter 1
Very nice. Good to see you posted something new :) I loved it!
Aemilia Rose
2005-08-17 . chapter 1
OH! This is a beautiful little gem! My heart is aching for Charlie. It's so beautiful how Claire can influence him so without even realizing it.

Beautiful piece, Minty!
Becky Greenleaf
2005-08-17 . chapter 1
Hi Mint Sauce, nice to see an update from you! Even if it's not Anagram *hint hint nudge nudge*.
Very interesting drabble. It's always nice to read your work! This story was very well-written.
I think that (and I'm sure a lot of people do too) that this will happen to Charlie sooner or later in Season 2. It'll make great fodder for more drabbles and stories.Oh the angst!
Anyway, great work as always!
Becky Greenleaf
Pookie-pants
2005-08-16 . chapter 1
wow. so many feelings about this story that im left kind of speechless. very well written.
goblz
2005-08-16 . chapter 1
That was awesome. I could see that happening on the show. Ah, poor Charlie. Some people were ** that he took the drugs at the end of last season, but I think it would have been cheap if he didn't. Of course he would be tempted. Anywayz, I liked this a lot. Great job.
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