that was great. If you'll ever make more please e-mail me

Aw... That was so sweet. I love the way you write.

Somehow your username sounds familiar... like I've seen it somewhere before? o.O

Hey this was great!

I hope you turn this one shot into a full story. Or atleast a sequel.

... Where the Hell have you been holed up?

Sorry, sorry. Thank you so much for posting this. Now I can post stuff too!

I so do love how you've done this story. Keep up the good work.

Ah, you're really making me want to get this game, Griffin...

What's to say that you don't already know? Your dialogue is solid, I love your use of description; you've got writing down to an art form that's multiple times my skill. I'm jealous.

Now all we have to do is get you updating more regularly. :P

Nicely done, Griff. Too bad it can't pop over at the GSFFA, too. _-