 daveymalucci510 3/20/02 . chapter 8this is getting good. update soon i have to know what happens to my poor dave. |
 FatCat 7/16/01 . chapter 8 This is great! Hope to see the epilogue soon! Dave will be okay, won't he! I mean he'll be able to walk again? Considering the damage! |
 jcal4evr 7/16/01 . chapter 8 Yeah! :sighs: I loved this. The epilogue better be Carby! Pretty pretty please? |
 The She Devil 7/16/01 . chapter 8 I WANT THE EPILOGUE NOW! And the 'KOVAC! YOU ARE GOING TO DIE!' part really cracked me up! I can so picture Dave doing something like that! I hope you put the epilogue up soon! Thanks! |
 Ginger 7/16/01 . chapter 8Great story! I really enjoyed it! |
 FatCat 7/10/01 . chapter 7 OMG! People Move! You got me all tensed up, can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Ginger 7/9/01 . chapter 7Oh god! Linda should definitely had done anything she could to let them know he stopped breathing bite them all I care just don't let them step all over her like that! I can't wait to read more so post more soon k! |
 jcal4evr 7/8/01 . chapter 7 THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU! Carby! Yay! And finally a chapter I can mostly (what's happening to Dave?) be happy about! ::sighs:: I am now content! |
 jill 7/7/01 . chapter 7 ooooo it's good! i waited forever for this one. you can't kill dave! nooo! have abby and carter hook up in the woods! hehe |
 The She Devil 7/7/01 . chapter 7NOOOOOOOOOOOO! MORE SOON! INTUBATE! QUICKLY! COME ON, DAMMIT! OKay, sorry for the short review, but i g2g! thanks for writing the next part! |
 Ginger 6/8/01 . chapter 6oh god this story is great! You have to post more ASAP! I can't wait to read the next part! |
 stephanie 5/19/01 . chapter 6 Don't do that to me! It's not right! Don't leave me hanging! Write more now! :) |
 jill 5/14/01 . chapter 6 NOOOO! you killed dave! bring him back! :( |
 cein 5/13/01 . chapter 6scream!
the next chapter had better be up soon... |
 Susan 5/12/01 . chapter 6 This story just gets better and better! Write more fast, please! |