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Great. Sequel? Keep up the good work.

That was a great fic!

Good story. Write more chapters.

good job so far! i haven't finished reading it yet but good job so far! I think tho, that maybe you should work on trying to find synonyms on the word "said"... like maybe to make it more interesting. BUT other than this all it's GREAT! good job! I'll read the rest later and really sign it.

Awww... that's so nice! SO WEIRD RULES!

Pretty ok story. Try paragraphs and line breaks to make it easier to read. I really liked the ending.