CUTE!! ADD MORE!!

*raises hand* Mint Chocolate-chip's my favorite too...
KAWAII!! Hakkai's so awesome!!

Thank Gods fot the cheeky/masculinly secure dragons then! X3

KAWAII!!*glomps Goku* Your so cute adn innocent and nieve!! E!! And this was fun! <3

The last few paragraphs left me scared for life AND needing a new lung. You really make Hakkai and Goku Sanzo's and Gojyo's torment, don't you?

Other than that, I loved the: "Face met floor; floor met face. Well met." Line.

I loved this chapter. You know, in now warped adult-twisted way, it's kind of like when the gods in heaven accused Konzen of being a pedophile to Goku's face.

Big mistake. You do not insult the Sun in front of the Earth born urchin.

I adore your writings~

I love the part with the fan. Goku comprehends more than he lets on! But then, that's the story of his life. :P

The First Present story was very dear, and I love how you make Sanzo a lot like Konzen to the younger Goku. It makes the progression so much smoother!

First Math... ya. Seeing Sanzo stand up for Goku AND rub Gojyo's face in the dirt nearly cracked my ribcage. Congratulations.

First Insomnia was just fluff and Konzen-like and wonder of wonders!

This was so fantastic. And Hakkai was so very kind and wonderful (dispite what I said in my last comment. Or maybe the evilness enhances it...)

'Sanzoly' matters. :P

XD Poor, poor scard Gojyo and Sanzo.

And Hakkai is so very, very evil.

The description of Goku staring at where Sanzo's eyes were and the paper slowly lowering was just perfect!

XD You have no idea how much I loved this chapter! It was the greatest humor of this earth!

I love how you write your Konzen. It's just such a perfect balance, with how he got Goku to take the medicine, and his softer side. Best rendition I've ever seen!

Goku's story was so cute! (As was yours, of course.)

Then ending... XD Konzen is pure evil and I LOVE IT!

This was a really sweet story. Very, very lovely.

And the ending made me chuckle.