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| TenshiGosuperu 2008-08-06 ch 1,  | abuseAw, this is very cute. It ties up future!cris and present!chris nicely. I also like that it's Leo's feelings and how he tries to fix things. |
| Sakurabound 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was really sweet! I loved it! Abbz |
| loverofteddy 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseAW! That was soo sweet! I loved it! |
| anonymous 2008-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI know it is really late for me to be reviewing but I just really feel the need to respond to one of the other reviews. Alright first of all, Wyatt is not only the name of their first son but also Leo's last name. Next, nowhere in this story does it say that Chris last name is Wyatt. Lastly, the author says that Chris is the youngest not oldest. So before some people feel the need to give a half a** review they should really try reading the story first, otherwise they just come off looking like an ignorant moron later on. That being said I really feel I should review the story now even though the author will probably never read it. I loved this story. It was everything I hoped would have happened with the Chris/Leo relationship on Charmed but never did, instead they had to focus their attention on half-wit characters and screw up what at one time was a really awesome show. I would really love to see some other stories by you where you explore their relationship a little more. Excellent job. Keep up the good work. |
| Von 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseAww. That is so lovely. :D There is not NEARLY enough attention paid to the Chris and Leo aspect of the family.. And after so much opportunity was presented in the show!! You did a fantastic job of it! Well done! |
| Egyptian Writer 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseALRIGHT! FIRST OF ALL, Wyatt is not the last name but the name of leo and piper's youngest son. Also if you were a true fan of Charmed you would know that when piper and leo married, piper kept her last name as Hollowell. And IF U TRULY, TRULY were a fan you would know that THE OLDEST'S NAME WAS NOT CHRIS BUT... I forgot but thats not the point. If you are going to write a story about a current television show you should watch it frequently and not ONCE and should get yo facts straight. i am egyptian writer and that is what i have to say. |
| 10000 Dead Roses 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseWow! I always imagined that Leo would have a hard time letting Chris go. I love the 'i meant to do that!' totally something he'd say! |
| Saynt Jimmy 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was extremely cute! I especially loved Chris' line "I meant to do that..." I cant really picture a little Chris saying that and it makes me happy. Excellent story! |
| Poke-Me-Im-Strange 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseaw! that's so adorable! i love little chris, he's so cute! great story, i loved it. |
| conformityissuicide 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseaww that's so cute! |
| mandymoore1 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuselove it, cute story |
| Writing Destiny 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI love it, so sad! and yet happy at the same time. (contented sigh) |
| ash-rox 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseaw thats so cute |
| Sam 2006-08-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseAW! Chris is soo smushy! I love how Leo really wants to keep Chris little forever. Great fic! |
| Nelia 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was very sweet, especially the end with the I love you bits. Well done, hope to read more soon! Nelia |