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ConfuzzledAtLife 2008-08-11 ch 5,	abuseWow, I find it absolutely AMAZING that you can write no less than FIVE TOP QUALITY STORIES in only 300 words. I wrote an absolutely terrible one for English; it sucked because we had to keep below 10. OK, I'm going to write a short review for each: STORY 1: Aw, that was so cute! My friend is obsessed with birds, and she's had this happen to her many times, though the mother bird doesn't thank her or anything. It reminded me of her, which made me so happy! I love my friends! And certain internet authors(hint, hint). I really loved the touch with the mummy bird giving Legolas her food, even though it'd be useless to him. The true nature of sacrifice... STORY 2: Hehe, sometimes a friend DOES know best. That was such a Legolas thing to do, whining about getting medical treatment ("I'm fine," anyone?) It was so in-character! Aragorn sounded like a real doctor, those irritating ones that don't listen, hehe. I haven't had any, but I've seen them in movies. Aragorn never listens to Legolas when it comes to his body, which was also really in-character. Great story! STORY 3: Lol, I can SO see Aragorn (and myself, actually) sending the servants out. If I were a man in Middle-earth, I'd probably become a ranger too. God, Legolas really knows how to compliment! If someone said that to me, I'd love them to bits! Though, he has a point. Aragorn is really fit to rule. When I was reading this, I thought of your story "Into the Forbidding Gloom", the bit where Aragorn is depressed because he thought Gandalf made a mistake appointing him leader. It gives him a really down-to-earth character which is really easy to like. Thanks! STORY 4 & 5: I thought it was a really great touch doing both Aragorn and Legolas's perspectives, as they would be thinking different things. I thought it was a good idea doing Aragorn's first, since it tells you of Legolas's body language, while you can't tell of that from his point of view as he's too wrapped up in emotions to notice. I never really thought of how Legolas would feel when he couldn't bring down that orc. Of course, Aragorn was right, it was definitely not his fault, but his "stubborn elvish pride" would make him think so, wouldn't it? Great observation there. Also, don't you reckon he looked kind of sick at the end of Two Towers? Course, Orlando could have been sick, or the blue screens could have clashed with his colouring, but I always did wonder about that. Guilt would way him down and make him sick. That really makes sense! If the movie could have been longer, they probably would have metioned it, especially after he felt guilty for desparing before the battle. Sorry for the way-too-long review. Hope you like it!
ShaolinQueen 2008-05-04 ch 5,	abuseAnd I know those would have been Legolas thoughts. You read them so well!
ShaolinQueen 2008-05-04 ch 4,	abuseI've always thought about that scene, felt so bad for Legolas, and I know Aragorn would have acted like you describe.
ShaolinQueen 2008-05-04 ch 3,	abuseAnother lovely one! Aragorn laughed. “I knew I kept you around for a good reason.” And I love the mirth you always put between them, great work!
ShaolinQueen 2008-05-04 ch 2,	abuse“Of course you don’t,” Aragorn replied. However, to the elf’s consternation, he continued to stir the herbs. “I will be perfectly fine without being drugged,” Legolas protested. “Of course you will,” That was really funny lol! I have the picture of the situation in my head, so funny :D!
ShaolinQueen 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseSuch a sweet story! But drabbles are so short!
anonymous 2007-09-17 ch 1, anon.	abuse"Kindness Rewarded" is very nice. Makes me think of my cats bringing dead rodents to our porch... Awesome job!
Val Evenstar 2007-08-04 ch 5,	abuseNever thought about that before, but come to think of it, he should have been able to kill that orc. I like these little tales - quick and easy to read, brings either a smile or a serious thought.
Linn152 2007-01-07 ch 5,	abuseaww...i liked that... i loved the descriptions and words you used in the stories...aww, that was sweet...i'm a sucker for legolas and aragorn fics =P
LegolasLover2003 2006-01-06 ch 5,	abuseI liked the one with the bird the best! Cute bird... Though what Leggy's going to do with a dead mouse is beyond me... The sleeping one was okay, mainstream mainly. The one about Aragorn's coronation was good. The films didn't capture how very unsure of himself Aragorn was in the books. And of course I like the guilty ones... Poor Haldir... sniff sniff Until next time... Laters!
Elvin BlueEyes 2005-11-16 ch 5,	abusei thought it was very good. Elvin BlueEyes
Silivren Tinu 2005-11-16 ch 5,	abuseAlready the last drabble... sigh I loved all of them! "His very presence beside me eases my heart" - sweet! huggles poor Legolas Thanks for writing and sharing these drabbles! :) Tinu :)
Sadie 2005-11-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseLovely. Deep and true...
invisigoth3 2005-11-15 ch 5,	abusenice story like both view points. keep up the good work, I enjoy reading your stories whether they are long or short
luermide 2005-10-29 ch 4,	abuseOo, I'm so excited! I loved this one...I'm glad there's a "sequel"

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