Great story! I like it!

This is good. You really have gotten into Ronon mind.

I really like this fic and I think you have a good insite on how Ronan feels :D

Good job

That is great. I would love to read more as the episodes go on. It is like Ronan has a journal and we get a small peek into his thoughts. Thank you for that.

Rees

I loved the next 2 chapters as well!

Loved it loved it want more please!!

I enjoyed you showing Ronon's thoughts, and the things that are behind the actions of the hot hotie man.

Wow. How do you put yourself into the head of this character so well? That's why I can't write fanfic. I scour the internet for your stories about this man. Please continue to entertain this lowly accountant, LOL.

That is very Ronan inspired... very insiteful... Great Fanfic keep it comin please

Wow short but strong a very good chapter keep it up.

I can so imagine Ronon thinking this. You have a very good handle on his character after such a short time. Looking forward to more.

Good, really good. Nice analysis of Ronon and how that episode went. Seriously, really good job.

Wow, this is amazing! I love your story. It adds such a depth to Ronon, (who's SUCH a great character). Keep it up! Can't wait to see your perspective on Conversion.

WOW, you have got a great story going on here. The first chapter made me tear up a little! Keep on going!

Excellent story, hope you keep it up.

I love your interpertation of Ronon! My hope is that the Ronon on the show is very similar. I'm amazed at how close your story is to the thoughts that I felt he conveyed in that very scene. Bravo!