Reviews for The Devil You Know

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empath89 2008-02-17 ch 22,	abusewow...i can't believe you don't have more reviews! this is really well-written and the story-line is great. i adore angel/lindsey, but there aren't enough of those fics out there! this is the best i've read so far, and the longest one. i loved it! hugs...empath
lokiana 2007-07-08 ch 1,	abusewonderful. I love ше ... You dont wanna wrote some story about what happen next?
Ali 2006-01-27 ch 22, anon.	abuseA very intreguing plotline, and followed though rather well. You are very good at descriptive sentences, and I loved some of the quirks ("wasn't quite a run, but wanted to be when it grew up"). However, the story could use some editing. Certain scenes were unclear, especially the one where An became evil. The reader was left with a 'okay, what the heck was that about' kinda thing, and that's probaly the most serious critisism I have on this story. There were also a few grammar and spelling errors that threw me. You wrote the characters pretty believeably, and I'm a huge goodLindsey fan, so the story made me happy. The ending was rather abrupt, and I would have liked a bit more relational development between Angel and Lindsey. Overall, a very engaging story, and I hope to read more from you in the future.
circenikos 2006-01-23 ch 22,	abuseWow, going to cover several chapters here, since I haven't been keeping up. I like the way that you brought everything together at the end, and everyone as well, it was nice to see Willow and Cordelia again :) Charlotte's death scene was great, you gave her so much personality, and I loved that. I could see the Katie thing happening before it did, but not An, poor An, I still don't entirely understand what happened to her, but it worked nicely in the plot. Kind of an abrupt ending, but at least things seem to have stabilized between Lindsey and Angel, and Angel doesn't seem to think that Lindsey is a wolf anymore. In a lot of ways the Lindsey that you write reminds me of Constantine, especially during his conversation with Cordy, he's got that whole good guy going to hell anyway vibe, I like that. Great story, it's been a pleasure following it and thanks for writing :)
DemonBlackheart 2006-01-01 ch 2,	abusethis chapter was great! I like how the lights go off at 8 o clock. that was a nice touch!
DemonBlackheart 2006-01-01 ch 1,	abusethis is really good so far. it tells what happened after Lindsey died in a different way not expressed in conversation. i like the dragon thingy. confused on what exactly it is but i like it anyway!
Rob 2005-12-12 ch 15, anon.	abuseExcellent! Simply excellent! When I read the first few chapters I was wondering "Where the hell is Buffy and the gang? If not her, then where is Faith?" I was very pleased when I read about the deal. This story is excellent, and I can't wait to read more. I have one question though. What's up with An? I liked that character, and I really am confused w. the split personality thing that occured in this chapter. Keep up the good work! :-)
circenikos 2005-11-23 ch 15,	abuseThe thing about a living person's blood in hell, interesting, and An is damn creepy. Lovely little bit with Spike worried about Illyria. Happily waiting for the next part :)
The Princess 2005-11-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis started out well, but it's devolved into a dull, confusing mess replete with endless digressions, subplots created, then abandoned without resolution and what little forward plot momentum comes screeching to a halt with the lengthly, badly written action scenes.
circenikos 2005-11-17 ch 14,	abuseI like seeing some of the history of the children, though I'm a little confused about what's happening in the present, not to mention, what happened to Lindsey? I really, really liked the glimpses of Angel's old gang. (:
circenikos 2005-11-05 ch 13,	abuseIs Lindsey back in hell? I'm a little confused about what's happening at the end of this chapter, but I'm sure that it'll clear up in the next one. Fantastic story, I love that you've brought Lindsey back and that he's tough. The kids were a surprise to me, because whatever episode they were previously in, I didn't see it, but then, I've only seen the last season of Angel. This is such an action oriented story, and I usually don't like those, but it's so well written that I found myself being drawn into it. I like the relationship that you're building between Spike and Illyria, it's so interesting and uncertain; it feels like it could go all sorts of places. I'm really enjoying this story and will eagerly wait for the next part :)
The Handsome Speck 2005-09-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseOhmigod! You officially are my favorite author on I'd never actually thought of the whole Spike/Illyria thing, but it definitely works! Hats and pants off to you! You are a goddess. This story kicks mah-jor bum. **. Butt. Posterior. -Handsome Speck P.S. You should write a Prison Break fic, once the genre gets a little more...ficable? Is there an adjective?
Rachael 2005-08-20 ch 3, anon.	abuseSOB Lindsey needs a big hug. Possibly from what Spike calls his "brave kinght"? I love your characterizations of the three survivers (and of course the one special guest surviver). They are exactly spot on. Poor Angel. First Fred, then Wesley, then Gunn, and now Lindey says that he was working for the PTB. I want to know what deal Lindsey made with the PTB, and could Lorne make a guest apperence any time soon. It'd be interesting to see his reaction on knowing that he really didn't need to kill Lindsey. Hugs all around if you post a new chapter soon!
Rachael 2005-08-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseInteresting... Those kids give me flashbacks to the seeres in Blind Date. How much to I love you for possibly bring back the kids (with no lines in the episode) that Lindsey saved and giving them powerful characters? A LOT! Marry me!
Rachael 2005-08-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! Keep writing in the Angel zone! You're fantastic at it!

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