Cool chapter. Update soon and read my fic "Aishiteru Itsudemo" Kish/OC fic (plus tart/pudding) and will start next chapter once I get a review. So please R&R on mine. ^__^

Hello! ^__^

I found you on MMPU forums, and have dropped in to leave a REVEIW on your fic! (Get ready for this one, cause it goes all over the place. I'm sorry!)

... It's short. T_T; Hopefully you're planning more chapters...? Because it's short.

Japanese... or American characters? The school thing is kinda awkward. In Japan, there are three years in High School, and you're a first year, second year, or third year. Not Freshman-Sophomore-Junior-Senior.

And the names are also cute, but lead me to believe more of the characters are American. Maybe children of westerners? O_o; Yep.

I adore the reference to Megatokyo! ^_^; Haha. Cool thing rocks!

Oh! One more thing... was the guy in the tree saying "oops" because he only wanted the first four girls, and the soccer-player was his mistake?

Um... Rated T... why?

Overall, I am pleased to see you're using your own original characters without trying to force the Mew Mews in, too. That, alone, earns you +TEN STYLE POINTS!

Keep it up!

i like it so far. update soon