Love it! I adore Tora. This view of his possible feelings in his new world was very insightful. True friendship lies buried deep within. Bye!

It gave plenty of insight on Tora. This will help my stories a whole lot, I love how you write, please just do one based on the anime shows, pleeeeeasseeee! I can't find the manga anywhere.

Very good and in character.

Had to reread this, but I still like it. I find this hard to do on the 'putor, used to paper and pen, so old fashioned of me. At first I thought it too long and then not long enough, but I want to shift a few things abit. What things?

Not sure, have to read again, hell I will read it again and enjoy it just as much. do you mind if I print it out and play abit?

Keep writing these! They are fun and an interesting look into the players

i think u r correct, about the chance 2 c redemption. i think that is what drew me 2 u & t in the 1st place. u have quite a talent. ever read dean koontz *the watchers*. i eagerly await more. enjoyed. z.

This is really cool to read with your Jaws-Claws story and I'm enjoying reading them both.

Beautiful... just beautiful. How cool to find some Ushio & Tora fics, and even better to discover that they are well-written, and enjoyable reads all the way around. I'm very much looking forward to reading more of your work.

Nice Job! This is a great fic. I hope you plan to write others in the future.