whoa that's like one of the best fanfics ever! keep up the good work!

So sweet..Ren is happy!! =D

go Ren hoot-hoot

Oh...so you've also got a shaman king fic huh?
Hehe, this is cool stuff!
Hope you'd update soon!!

Same with beyblade,
Good Luk!
(I'm starting to sound like a broken record aren't i?)

Whoa that was so...AWESOME! Dude I thought that described Ren perfectly, well except for the part about him looking crazy, but seriously, I liked it alot! Keep up the good work man!

- xImperfectlyX

ok that was the strangest thing i read in my life but it was pleesing non the less so right more

o.O omfg this is scary!! but I *love* Ren being evil^^ good job this really gets Ren's personality out...muhahha! ...sry XD I love it -.^

WOW!! and I mean it, WOW!! that's one of the bests fanfics I've ever read! ^^ and i meanz it! that is REALLY good! everything is written descriptively, with deep thought and meaning. g'job! *thumbserup* ^^ muahaha... DIE, EN, DIE! ^^ thaz what ya get for hurting Ren-sama! ^^ please update soon! Will this have a happy ending? :3 lyyke Ren-sama befriends Yoh-sama and such? ^^ well anyhowz again great job! ^^ even in pain and laughing maniacally Ren-sama ish supahh snexy #^^#. he always ish... ^^ (but then no one wanted to hear that did they --; )

well yeah! g'job and update soon! ^^

Nice. I love your repeating theme; it's a good literary technique.

I've been thinking for a while of writing a fic exclusively to see Ren covered in blood. You did a pretty good job of it. ^_^

Write more please!

-MeeLee

It really has a nice poetic ring to it. I just can't imagine Ren doing what he did in the end though.

...That was cool... and kinda scary... but cool!

Whoa...that's pretty deep and sad but it was great! I hope you continue to write more good fics^_^