 Erik 1/12/06 . chapter 1 Yeah this was a good story, I didn't notice that there were chapters until the second time around. I've read the whole thing now, and I was wondering, do you write your stories from your own point of view? Like as if you were to make yourself the main character, to identify with the main character, and just write like that? Because some parts just seem like it was about you, if you didn't plan it maybe it just comes out in your writing? Or maybe I'm just seeing things. But some things just seem sort of like you, it's really intresting.
Anyways, good job with the story and write more. Where's that sixth chapter? |
 dracosgirl2515 too lazy 12/1/05 . chapter 5 hey there, good plot but the chapters are a bit short for my taste! anyway good luck and keep it up! |
 anon 11/3/05 . chapter 2 VERY GOOD. yOU SHOULD CONTINUE WRITING FAN-FICS HTE ARE VERY GOOD.
LORENZO |
 whydouwannwknow 10/12/05 . chapter 4 wha?this story is so fricking weird.why would hermione and malfoy be together?dumbdumbdumbdumb.grammar improvement needed.
wut the heck was that about?
DULL |
 Pinkiriffic 9/29/05 . chapter 5I like!
Especially the mental 'unstableness' of Hermione ) )
It's going to be fun seeing what will happen..
Good job and keep writin! |
 Magicke Moste Evile 9/16/05 . chapter 5I agree with ALL the other reviewers...dis is DA best chappie ever...rock on...lol...101 tips 2 charm a teenage boy...nice one...n i even like da fact Ginny is smelling a fat rat...update or else i'll hex U...shit golden trio broken...but is ok...hermione has "better" things up her sleeve...write soon... |
 Magicke Moste Evile 9/16/05 . chapter 4by the way...do u listen 2 avril? becuz ure title is 1 song of her...so much 4 my happy ending...thoguh ure story is nothing like her song. i like the way u dedicated 1 WHOLE chapter 2 HERMIONE'S POV...tho i didn't like d part bou her dad. i mean in da book he's alive n a kewl dentist...well maybe ure the rebel...i like dat. and c'mon y make her mom hate her? she's special 2...rebel again! go on...this one was GOOD |
 Magicke Moste Evile 9/16/05 . chapter 3hey hey hey! good one...remindz me of holz...but shit...exam comin..(sorry boring u wit shit)...but what happ. over "Last Summer hols" the one Harry talks about?/ |
 Magicke Moste Evile 9/16/05 . chapter 2umm its me the one who gave the review by da name "Lover..." well a li'l prob...hw cn herm like Draco if he's SO mean 2 her?/ i don'tthink she can forget his MudBlood or any of his other insults...she had an ego bigger than his head u knw...but i'll read on n let u knw...cheers |
 lover 9/16/05 . chapter 1 goodie good so far... |
 mysticgirl1713 9/16/05 . chapter 5 This is awesome. Eloquently written and brilliant vocabulary. I love it! |
 Kaeme 9/16/05 . chapter 5LOL, nice story, Bitter. very imaginative XP. like how u think... u think like the characters! |
 Jennifer 9/16/05 . chapter 5 hahaha, when Harmone was laughing 5 minutes straight, that is just like me, lol.
Yep, it's really good. Gets exciting every chapter! |
 Jennifer 9/16/05 . chapter 4 Wow *blinks* that's really awesome! I mean, it's really deep, hehe, lol. |
 Jennifer 9/16/05 . chapter 3 *sighs* reminds me of the summer time.. just relaxing.. not worrying about a thing about school. Well, again, it's pretty good! |