Could you please update? I know you haven't in almost 2 years but this was my all time favorite story and I just re read the last 2 chapters. Please?

Wow I remember reading this back when u first started it and can't believe its been since 2006 I haven't had a chance to read this I'm gonna re read it from beginning to end and hope u contine the story i. Know its been 2 years almost since an update but maybe u will return and finish this one I always loved reading it because it was so different but with my favorite characters. Please finish this :) this has to be one of the longest stories in history of ff so congrats!

This was good I cant wait for more

I love this story so much! I just read it again and it is just as good as I remembered! I have come back to it every so often, and am extremely sad every time because there hasn't been an update :,( are you still working on this story? If so, or if not I would love to know either way! You can email me at if you ever get a free moment! Please tell me your going to finish it its amazing!

A FRIENDLY..DESPERATE BUMP! I hope that everything is ok and i hope that se can see a new chapter soon :)

Did u give up on this story I hope not it's really good. Plllzzzzz post soon

i just reread this and it's so good. please continue with it :) i love how you make me hate a character at the beginning of a chapter and then love them at the end of the chapter.

I am so sorry that it's taken me FOREVER to review this! Forgive me? :)

First of all, I just want to say that I am SO conflicted. I am a Jommy fan through and through (I mean, aren't we all?) but your story has changed my views of all the characters so drastically that I just cannot decide what I want anymore! Haha.

At one point during the story I absolutely HATED Travis, but now I am strangely obsessed with him. I wouldn't mind if Jude ended up with him. To be honest, after constantly seeing Tommy make an ass of himself and just thoroughly manage to piss me off, I'd almost rather Jude end up with Travis.

The part that REALLY got to me in this chapter was when Tommy said, "But, you know, if it was anyone, it would be you." I was like W T F. I literally said that out loud to my computer screen. He goes from hot to cold so quickly that I can't keep up. I keep asking myself, Do I love him? Do I hate him? Am I rooting for him? ... I'm just conflicted.

I keep thinking back to Jude's dreams -the ones of her possible life with Travis, Tommy, and Taylor. Of all the dreams, of course the Jommy dream makes me the happiest, but as you delve more into the psyche of the enigma that is Tom Quincy I can't help but wonder whether or not that vision of Tom is ever a realistic possibility.

Tommy is so damaged that I don't know if his character could survive a 180 turn like that... I don't know if I'd buy a "happy and in love Tommy."

Your writing feels so real to me that I literally have conversations with myself about it while reading... It's fantastic. :)

Great update as always! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Do you have any idea how much longer you plan to make the story? You've been going strong for six years now! That's very impressive! :) I'm sure that letting go of this story when you finally do finish it will be so difficult -this story is like your baby! After six years how could you not be incredibly attached to it? :) Well, regardless of how long it takes you to finish this story, I plan to see it through to the end! :) You have yourself quite a loyal reader! Haha.

I'm still waiting for a Wilted update too! I loved where you were headed with that story!

Anyways... Enough of my rambling! Great job! Post soon!

-Rae :)

Are you going to finish this fanfic. You have an interesting story but it needs to be completed. Tommy needs something drastic to happen to show that he is in love with Jude before it is to late.

Hi Loren!

I'm a new user so I can't send private messages yet but i've been following you for a long time now! I'm a huge fan of all your work and i dont even watch most of the shows you write about! You have inspired me to write myself. Can you please betaread a story i'm starting to write?

How can Tommy forgive Angie like that when she faked her own death but not forgive Jude for lying? It makes me want Jude to end up with Travis!

I'm new to this site so can I only talk about one chapter or I can talk about every chapter?

Oh snap, This isn't even a review! I'm talking to you... But how can you critize something that is so perfect?

Wow! What can I say, you've done such a great job with this fic.

You've created a completely involved story, here. I still have a hard time believing just how quickly you've changed my views of the central characters and so quickly. For example one chapter you completely loath Travis and the next you definitely want Jude to end up with him! It's really quite baffling at just HOW involved with the characters I've become while reading.

You've weaved quite the intricate story here and it's really made it come alive and actually feel a connections towards their fictional lives.

I'm really looking forward to an update!

omg i love this chap. i hope u post more soon

This story is so good, i can't even read other fics anymore, cause i just miss this one ;) starting my second pass through the entire thing, just in case i missed anything good, so that should take me several days (not that many though cause i'm a stay-at-home mom) I really love the way you nailed the characters, and the plot never gets stale. One thing i would love to see though is Jude and Tommy get in a huge fight and then start makin' out (a la Xander and Cordelia circa season 2 of Buffy) , cause that would be wicked. not sure how you would fit that in just yet but give a girl some vicarious thrills! anyhoo i just wanted you to know that this is my all time fave fanfic for any show, and i cant wait to see your next update!

Sorry my comment get cut :(

i bet that Jude shock the hell out Tommy when she show him that she is more mature and want some clousure ...and finally move on ,and i think that Tommy also had clousure ,but i can see how he didnt like that Jude is letting go the past,he is really selfish ...he have Angie uggg he is so complex , i want to know what is going in in his mind...i bet is scary.

Oh Travis Travis, you know i love him right? I know that he is not mean to be with Jude but ím glad he is in her life because that get Tommy mad and is so fun to read.

I cant wait for the next chapter , amazing chapter ! Happy valentine day!

Sorry my comment get cut :(

i bet that Jude shock the hell out Tommy when she show him that she is more mature and want some clousure ...and finally move on ,and i think that Tommy also had clousure ,but i can see how he didnt like that Jude is letting go the past,he is really selfish ...he have Angie uggg he is so complex , i want to know what is going in in his mind...i bet is scary.

Oh Travis Travis, you know i love him right? I know that he is not mean to be with Jude but ím glad he is in her life because that get Tommy mad and is so fun to read.

I cant wait for the next chapter , amazing chapter ! Happy valentine day!