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Liem
2008-07-18
ch 21,
abuseI don't know if I left a review before, when I read this series for the first time, but even if I did I'll leave one again. I loved, loved, loved these drabbles, especially the last two. The last one is so beautifully written, especially "To the Moon and Back." That one hurt -me-. I'm glad I decided to come back and reread this. It was wonderful.
Iku
2008-02-04
ch 20,
abuseEh, Zuko is OOC in this chapter but who care's...we all know he's a big softy. XD
Zirra Nova
2007-12-09
ch 21,
abuseYe... very nice collection you have here. *purrs* Lovely...and the last is so saddly sweet. ^..^ Lovely..
Vicki So
2007-08-06
ch 21,
abuseI remember reading this piece and feeling so heartbroken for Zuko. The poor boy needs more happy times in his life (please, season 3, get the boy laid...)

Wonderful work, as always.
Shadowed Dreams
2007-07-16
ch 21, anon.
abuseThis is going to sound completely obsessed...but it's been burning on my mind for a while now...so think what you will...

Writing seems to come so easy to you. I've been reading your work for a few weeks now, and it's so easy to read. So amazingly clear and inspiring, so real and yet...still so wonderful to escape to. I can't stop re-reading The Hunter and the Prey. I can't stop re-reading Drabble Bending...

At first I couldn't figure out why. It was so torturing, knowing that I couldn't stop. It seemed so wrong to me, to love The Hunder and the Prey--It's so sad and so heartbreaking. But then I realized why I'm so caught up in this-enchantment!

The characters are so unbelievably real. I fell in love with the characters. They have their weaknesses, their wants, their dreams, and their past. And because of this, their only wish, an unspoken wish, is impossible. It's so human to want two contrasting things. (Katara being in love with the enemy...)

It's so real, the way Katara and Zuko just kind of...fell...into the trap they found themselves in in the end. That's why I couldn't stop reading. It's not a SAD story, it's a real story. And when you come to think of it, everything ends in death. It doesn't have to be sad, it's just the way it happened.

So, RedNovember-- I've finally fallen into your collection of fans. :0

I only have one question...

How do you hold onto your inspiration long enough to finish a story you started, and how do you make the characters so human?

I guess that's two.

Anyway, your work is amazing--all of it.

: )
firequeenAzula
2007-07-11
ch 4,
abusewell writen but really sad makes me almost sorry for aang's issues
firequeenAzula
2007-07-11
ch 3,
abusei like how he loves katara more than a chance to be royal agin
firequeenAzula
2007-07-11
ch 2,
abuseintresting wonder if we find out what actualy happend
firequeenAzula
2007-07-11
ch 1,
abusewow that was good but really sad
Melodiee
2007-07-09
ch 21,
abuseXD I was so surprised and pleased to see an update from you, then I realized that I'd read this before. Still as gorgeous and beautiful as the first time I read it.
BlueEclipse
2007-07-09
ch 21,
abuseWow... okay, let me get over the amazement that you've updated (and that's not meant to sound rude or anything, I'm just glad that you've posted something!) I've never read anything like this. It was very original, and written very well, as all your work is! Aang seemed to be a little OOC when he told Zuko that he had nothing, but I guess that's because he doesn't like Zuko. Well... please keep writing, and I enjoyed this piece very much!
Racheakt
2007-07-09
ch 21,
abuseYou know something...I could see something like this happening in the conclusion of Avatar, the blinding and all...

Well done, the conflicting emotions you worked into this are impressive indeed.

The only thing I have to criticis is the disjointedness of the different passages, its difficult at times to keep track of the storyline, but maybe you intended that.

Keep up the good work!

Steel
CherryChocolate
2007-07-09
ch 21,
abuseI was so-so thrilled to see that you haven't died yet. Thank you for that.
Too bad that i have already read this particular story. Actually it happened two days ago.
I also read both THATP and LTE over again and i would like to know if my hopes for the epilogue of the latter one are pointless?

I hope this post was only a start and you continue writing.
I am even willing to send you some chocolate if you'd do that and that means much. Because I live in Estonia but that doesn't light a bulb to anyone.

I wish you good luck and spirit. Whip your muses.
hard.

:)
Azamiko
2007-07-08
ch 21,
abuseIs it strange that I like that Zuko was right?
Scarylady
2007-07-08
ch 21, anon.
abuseI read this on your LJ but didn't comment...it's really a wonderful piece. Truely wonderful.
PS. Just 'cuz you haven't updated "Love thy Enemy" in over a year, doesn't mean you're off the hook. Epologue please! (am willing to smack around your muse if it will help)
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