awesome I love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter

Great story

O,, i really like the story! cant wait for an update! :D

I just wanted to say that I really am enjoying your story. It has been awhile since I last read a King Arthur story because they all started to become the same. I ment to review on the first two chapters but wanted to read the next chapter to find out what happened. I think this was my favorite chapter so far, just because I don't think any other female, in the fanfics, has stood up to Maruis (sp??) like Cerelinde. Keep up the great work!

-FFAMasquerade2005

Nice story

please update sson. i know everyone gets busys ince its school ime but please don't neglect your readers.

Ok, I just read this story and I MUST beg you to update. Because you haven't done that since like May. So PLEASE update!! Pretty please?

Please update soon. Are you going to still keep Dagonet? or follow the movie?

Ooh I like this. Very magical, and yet you've managed to keep Cerelinde from becoming an OC. I'm looking forward to more!

Update? How much should I praise you to have a nother chapter added.

And Icarii? Sara Douglass? Niice. They should have a section thing for her writing. . . .

Anyway more praise to you: I love this, I love you, I want more.

Ooh, I'm starting to sound like my ex. boyfriend now. Better stop. (me) You! Continue, at least, the story.

SO... she´s a GODDES! Isn't she? Somehow I have that feeling.
I like the story so you better update soon

This is interesting, but Cerelinde sounds a bit like the I'm-coldblooded-and-I-like-to-kill-for-no-reason kinda girl. So yeah, I'm guilty of creating a similar character, but it gets sorta boring and typical.

On a positive note, Cerelinde's loss of memory makes the story interesting, and promises a plot. I liked the duologue with Tristan, he's "in character" and the conversation is natural.

Anyway, just don't make Cerelinde an invulnerable supergirl. I think this story has loads of potential, and I like the references to myths and such, it makes the story realistic :)

hey, the story is really good so far it sounds to me like she's a greek god... artmeis i think her name is... anywayz i really like the story update soon please

OH, YAY! you updated! I'm so happy!

super story by the way: thanks so much for updating!

Sort of a crossover, hmm? That's OK. I adore Sara Douglass' books.

Anyways, on to the story. I know, I know. I have been a bad girl not reviewing your story for a while (or ever; not sure which, and I'm too lazy to go back and look.) I like Cerelinde. I also like this a lot: “'Do you believe?' asked Cerelinde suddenly. The moment the words left her lips, he did not know of what she spoke, but the answer came easily.

'I believe in the land, the wind, and the senses.'

And the moment he said it, he had no idea why. Tristan didn’t like uncertainty – it killed people, made them careless. He had vowed to never be careless, so why was he standing in the clearing, talking to a mysterious almost-stranger?

'If you let me,' she whispered, 'I could be more than a stranger.'” This little thing is very much Tristran. He definitely is in character, and you are starting to reveal a little more about him. And Cerelinde, come to think of it. A pat on the back for this little part.

However, one small thing to point out. There probably is no way on earth that mercenaries would be more afraid of a woman then Sarmatian knights. Oh well. Each to their own.

Anywho, lovely work with this chapter. I really am enjoying this. Your writing is very fluid, and I like how it reads if you can understand what I'm saying. Ah, so yes. Update soon, please. I can't wait for the next one. 'Til next time,

~Priestess