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| Russ Dog 2008-09-28 ch 28,  | abuseThat was an incredible chapter! The last part really had me worried,though... Anyways, your writing is also very good, and hopefully you can update soon, yeah? Keep up the great work! |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 28, | abuseWow. And no pre-read this time? Such a shame. (giggle) Okay, now that I'm all caught up, I've been up too long. Time to think happy thoughts. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 27, | abuseOh, right, that happened later. But then why was Eishun talking about the pact with Konoka? |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 26, | abuseTypical. It seems as though you've skipped so much, though. Hardly any battle with Chigusa and her minions, and we didn't even see him make the pactio with Setsuna, much less Konoka's! |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 25, | abuseGood, good, good. I love it. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 24, | abuseAwesomeness. Kotaro's so cool. It's just such a shame Akamatsu had to introduce him to us as a bad guy. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 23, | abuseAh, yes, this is so nice... |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 22, | abuseWorked out just fine. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 21, | abuseI love the sarcasm Negi uses with Asakura. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 20, | abuseGood, good, good. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 19, | abuseHeeheehee...so silly. Smart, too. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 18, | abuseVery good, then. And yeah, this is good. Very good. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 17, | abuseWahahaha! Priceless! |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 16, | abuseRam? No, that's not right...Aries is the ram; I know because I am one. (Oddly enough, I don't think any of the girls in this book are Aries...) It should be a bull, then. And, yeah, I know all about couches being bad for your muscles. |
| Cyberchao X 2008-08-31 ch 15, | abuseNegi's a playa, plain and simple. Don't be ashamed of it, man! |