This was so good and funny, I loved it! I have to read it again and I was laughing when Ryoma told Keigo that Karupin ate his fishes!

Thank you so much for such a wonderful story_

Wow that's a nice, believable Atobe/Ryoma one-shot. Care to make more? XD

I must say, this is one of the best oneshots I've read... EVER. I love your characterization of Echizen and Ore-sama! Heh. It feels very in character and the disjunction in time makes this piece even more interesting. I love your writing style as well. Atobe feels so...ATOBE. I can't put it any other way. The best part is that it still manages to be painfully cute. I love this!

"Atobe has an exquisitely refined taste and impeccable style. He realizes that it’s his duty to educate the deprived masses. And he does so with every condescending smirk he directs at the adoring public."

You cant get more Atobe than that!

*.* aww... that was a nice and lovely Royal Pair Story! I love this Pair..*.*

I think you've written them both very well and InCharacter but there could be some more Hints between them..*.* *want to feel the love* xD It's also very short - it would be cool if you could continue this story..*.*

*wants more royal pairs*

anyway this story was awesome! _ I loved your Atobe! And Ryoma...x3 "Karupin ate them" *kyahahahaha* ..*drop* gomen! "

Lady

Oh so so perfect for the Royal Pair.

Made me grin, cheers!

I never thought I'd like this pairing, but when it's written this way... well I certainly can't complain. Especially when I'm trying not to fall out of my chair or choke on my tongue from laughing so much.

Oh Karupin...

LOL

I just love the dialogue; it's so funny! xDD;; lol

I'll be looking forward to reading your other PoT Fics. X3

i liked it. the flow was a little choppy, but ryoma was very cannon. good job.

I have absolutly no idea why this couple is so appealing, but it is! Cute story, I loved the part with Karupin.

Ok.. this was good.. so was everything else I've read so far, but THAT'S beside the point. I felt you had captured the essance of the characters well. Six or four door limo's is VERY Atobe. Ryoma maybe older, but he is still a brat none the less. Kabaji with his family, this conjuers up images of a whole lot of tall, hulking people that tend to use USU as an entire vocabulary. Nice bit of fluff to round of with. Great job!

*pokes you*

You made me like [insert AtoRyo pairing name]. Erm. Like it more.

...I want moore

I Love AtoRyo -* YAy!

Please more AtoRyo!

Heh, oh God the snark *clings to you*. You wrote the Royal pair, with snarky Ryoma and mightier-than-thou ATobe.

I would quote lines I liked... but there's far to many. This pairing amuses me too much *giggles*

I'm hoping to add more to tha community later with more royal pair fun... but classroom object pron is getting ready to kidnap me *looks over shoulder to see it getting a bag and rope ready*

you got their personalities down to pat. the sheer amount of ryoma-snarkiness and atobe-narcissism makes this fic utterly enjoyable. things are never dull with this two.

Nice fic...XD... well... kinda miss FujiRyo angst... but for now I'm into a new pairing RyogaRyoma...XD... AtoRyo... I read some very nice one in Chinese... and really people should write more of this pair in English too I mean in Chinese, the percentage of AtoRyo fic doesn't lose to FujiRyo or TezuRyo... there even YukiRyo, RyoRyo of course... and there a lot of OshiRyo, KiriRyo and even NiouRyo, OhtoriRyo, MizukiRyo, SaeRyo, MaruiRyo...etc... and allRyo... well if you know chinese you should realy check it out but you need to become a member first...