The Clone Wars always a sticky and uncomfortable issue for me and almost drove me out of Star Wars fandom entirely. Just how messed up the galaxy is when you have 13 year old commanders, 10 year old slave soldiers, & no one's kriffing blinking. It's interesting and telling that there is no thought spared for the slave army the Jedi are now commanding. Just the Jedi, just the Force.

A great story. Very good.

Oy! You never fail to amaze me, you like Star Wars as well? This was very good, I can't wait to see what the Clone Wars will be like, you portrayed Obi-Wan very well. Thanks for the fic!

I like that! Not how I imagined the Clone Wars to be, but I loved the family of Jedi thought...you captured the suspense of the moment pretty well too.