Okay this was sad and now I'm slightly depressed.

This story is written well thou but I'm confused who the characters are but I'll just use my imagination and say it was a Shika/Tayuya pairing with Sakon as the killer.

But again great story.

really sad and good ,i can see it as shikatema but him knowing medic justu un real and it also changes my mind that it might not be him plus who is the other guy?

Short, but very interesting. I liked it.

omg! that made me cry! and i had a figgin song about death in the background! and i could visualize all that was happeing!

hey i loved the story. it made me wanna cry wich is something i rarely do.

This is really good...and really sad. I'm guessing the characters are Shikamaru and Temari. Keep writing, because you're good at it.

Almost cried

Open to interpretation? (I'm thinking Kabuto/Tayuya.)

Wow, that was really sad. Love your writing, though.

:3 Judging of the pairings of Naruto you write about... This is Shikamaru/Tayuya pairing right? XD

It's so sad T_T It made me have tears .

Beautifully written!

Oh WHAT? Thats just wrong. Thats frickin terrible. Aw man. Now i feel all sorry and sad. Good job man. Not many fics can do what to me in under 10 words.

i kinda already know who talking in dis stori but really who is it?

PS just 2 make sure

hello! a very nice fanfic you got there. Can I ask something? It's because I also have my fanfic so, how can I pose my fanfic here in this website?

Wow... Nice... very good stroy. I wish you could write some more like this. Very good job.

omg this is wonderful, i love this story so much lol

i'm interpreting this pairing as Temari and Shikamaru (unless u later bonk me in the head with another pairing) i'm sticking to that lol

hope i'll read more of ur writing soon! ;p

i like i t alot but i still dont see who these ppl are... its hard to see it since ther is no decription on anything but blood! samn it was good. ill just make it a neji tenten fic in my mind. it's alot better since i hate the point where sakura dies. so yah. not that i ever wnted tenten to die but it's ezer for me ti imagen. bybyyuko kimura