what the f*** ? IRIS AND GENE! :0 that is so...so...so damn BAD!

! I WANT TO MARRY GENE TOO! Very funny. Make it really cool in chp. 2 and he's marrying Mel. Hey you can read my story if you want to. It's called Outlaw Star 2. What's it about? I'll leave that to you. Tell me if you like it. Toodles

Lol that's awsome! Iris for Gene, definitely! Nice point about the the white gown _ I see it that way too.

Smart man. I'd run to if that were about to happen to me. ICK!

Say, that's pretty good.

::Chants:: GENE LOVES MEL! GENE LOVES MEL! GENE LOVES MEL! SCREW IRIS! SHE CAN GO DIIIIIEEEEEEE! NO ONE LIKES HER ANNOYING ASS! Please fix this and MAKE GENE GO FOR MEL! ALL THE WAY! XO!

You know, you can't write a proper review when you're laughing. I must come back and leave a better one.

lol... hehehehehe... melfina's single! mwahahahahaha! go harry!

This is sooo funny! Youu crack me up. How did Gene end up going to marry Iris? And what does 'glaring daggers' at somebody mean? That little knives are shooting out of their eyes?

i hate it well i wouldent hate it if jean would marry melfina!

GENE AND MELFINA FOREVER! PISS OFF IRIS! NOBODY LIKES YOU!

what the ,dude i usually give good reveiws but that just sucked cause first of all gene is supposed to marry melfina_and the anten seven where there and so was the macdugall brothers? try writing another one and this time b realistic please?:( peace out jerbal

!;p That was vvveeerrryyy funny!;)Even though I have NO idea who all those people are but Gene, Jim, Aisha, Suzuka, Fred and the McDougall Brothers! But its still halarious!( I can't spell just to let ya know!:)

luv it luv it

i simpyly luuuved dat!

r u gonna ryte another chapter/part?

pleeze do!

and maybe sumtin ud happen between gene and mel...*

lol, i liked it!