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gonekrazy3000
2006-05-07
ch 8,
abuseinteresting... *rubs chin*
interesting indeed. I eagerly await the next chapter. *adds story to story alert*
Please update soon.
Dragon and Sword Master
2006-01-31
ch 6,
abuseAlright, I don't get this chapter what so ever, I'll admit that, but the details and everything about it is good nonetheless.
a memory forgotten
2006-01-16
ch 5, anon.
abusehm, now that you started it, I can't wait to see what this theory is. I like how you seperate the chapters, something original and unique.
nicola-235
2006-01-10
ch 5,
abuseYes! You finally updated!

The writing didn't seem lazy at all. Though, a few typos were spotted.

I liked your similie about the tree.

Keep going, please. 10/10
Dragon and Sword Master
2005-11-02
ch 4,
abuseNo, he can't die! He has Kid to look after, if that's who I think it is. Very good chapter and story so far.
Dragon and Sword Master
2005-10-12
ch 3,
abuseWow, this is pretty good. I can't wait to see what Janus and the others do to protect Kid. I'm assuming that Serge is the one guiding the young lad and giving him these dreams of his.
nicola-235
2005-09-14
ch 2,
abuseYES! Update! And it was great! T_T But... Okay, if Kid's Schala's clone, and Serge is Janus, aren't they siblings? Because Janus and Schala are brother and sister in Chrono Trigger, if you haven't played it. Anyway! Please update soon!
nicola-235
2005-09-13
ch 1,
abuseThis made me cry, damnit. Continue! Continue! Before I cry more. T_T
Capella A. Morningside
2005-08-27
ch 1,
abuseThe bad news: I almost didn't click on this story, because of the thrown-together look of the summary with its lack of punctuation, and the lack of capitalization in the title. It's hard for me to click those because I fear the story will be in the same state of shambles... you are one of the incredibly, incredibly few exceptions.

The good news: Bravo, bravo. I really do look forward to reading more on this excellent piece. I myself have a continuation of the Chrono series in the works, but I don't think our concepts have anything in common, especially since I won't be using Kirge. Not that I don't approve of it when pulled off well. :)
StryderHiryu
2005-08-21
ch 1,
abuse-.-;;...

*dr0olz*
Starx
2005-08-21
ch 1,
abuseIt's a pretty good start.
FinalFantasyChick190
2005-08-20
ch 1,
abuseKirges rock! Anyway, this is done really well. You did well with the emotion. *nods* so sad...*sniffles*

Yea, you better have the next chap damn soon...hehe...I suck at updating. lol.

ANNA
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