It's cute :3

wow. This is wonderful. The face and the inside of each character and how iot makes htem different and the same.

Wow. I love your style, your pacing, and your characterization. This was an amazing fic, as well as your Ninamori/Naoto. Those two were the only ones I've read so far, though but I'm off to read some more.

I liked it. Although I do agree you sort of lost focus at the end. The last two sentences are actually quite good.

I love it. I adore how you weave words-exactly the way I try to.

I also like how you explain why more people aren't attracted to Sango. I mean, considering that she goes around in the ancient Japanese equivalent of a catsuit, it's always been mysterious to me.

i liked it. it was very good XD!

- jessie D

I really liked this. Your take on Sango and Miroku was quite good and seemed very in-character, at least to me it did. The flow of this with all of the ellipses was also nicely done. So great job!

I wish I could write like you. Such a great glimpse into Sango's mind.

I thought you did a good job. Keep it up!

None the less I think it worked well, I think it was a nice exploration of her feelings and the group dynamic.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza