Reviews for Your Beautiful Smile

IvoryMoonDreamer 2005-10-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, that's a really pretty poem. I rarely read something as in depth as this, and it's a pleasure to read something as well worded and thought out at this poem. Keep up the good work!
Miki-Death-Strike 2005-09-16 ch 1,	abuseHey! Not bad. I understand that you're trying to make the poem sound as elegant as possible, but I can't imagine Sion saying that. But hey, he's not. You're just writing what you see . . . well, this was great. Loved the detail! I'll be having one out soon! Keep writing!
Solid Snake's Soldier 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abuseIncredible! Wonderfully descriptive and touching. I loved every line of it! It's easy to see Sion writing this poem to Dominique. I can do nothing other than applaud. Very well done! Write poems for other genres if you can!
Water-star 2005-08-21 ch 1,	abuseI really like this poem it's so romantic! Also I love Sion!