Oh I like this fic! Its serious in parts and then has humor! I like it! _ Please, please, please do another chapter soon!
Fayr 9/2/01 . chapter 2
Well, I like it so far. It's really kinda humorous, and I like that in a story. But you really should keep track of the names. I've noticed that sometimes it's in English, then in Japanese. It gets me easily confused.