Great chapter..., hec, the whole lot is great actually. :) Although a few minor mistakes through out it, its got a 10/10 from me. Read the first chapter a couple days ago and i got hooked on it. Laughed a bit over D not being good lolz.. Hope you'll follow up on this one in future. Great job, keep it up :)

great chappy update again when you can i love reading your story!! your doing a great job!!

Hello! I love your fic! Honestly, this one has to be thee one and only D-slightly romantic fan fiction that I've ever liked (that wasn't with Doris Lang of course). Very creative.
I admire you for actually finishing your fics. I've never finished a story in my life so far...but I am currently writing a D-fic and I WILL finish it!

I was so happy when I saw you updated, I love this story so much and so do many others!

*purr* Story for me. One goof though (I think): Lilah finds it odd to think of D showering being a dhampir and all, and then goes and showers herself? Also, if showering is odd, how do they usually wash?

Great chapter! LH's comment about D not being any good cracked me up. Hilarious dialogue in that scene. I really like how D explained his actions. Nicely done. And you ended with at a great spot--I'm anxious to see what happens :D Nicely done!

Nice. I read this story ages ago and I'm so excited to see that a new chapter has been put up! Hope it doesn't take too long to see another one, cos this is good ;)

Mush, woman. Stop answering all my silly questions over at the D forum and get started on writing!

I love this story and hope you update soon. btw I love how Chapter Twenty is called "Questions" as in 20 Questions! lol!

I read this story in one sitting and I enjoyed every chapter. I do hope you plan to update soon!

"God No! Mom died in the barfight!" I laughed my ass off! Your writing is amazing! never change. I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

I have to admit, after the last chapter i was wondering where in the world you were going with this story- it almost didnt feel like the same one!
Don't worry about the amount of dialogue- i've seen published stories that take four pages just with characters talking.

i really should be working on my own stories.. but i think i'll just keep reading yours for now!
:)

I love this story! It's so amazing. After reading this went and listened to Get Stoned, I laughed so hard! It fits so well.

Oh my god, I don't care if they're mating like bunnies, they are ADORABLE. :) I mean it. So cute. Actually the mating like bunnies, considering it's D, makes it even somewhat more adorable, lol. Anyway, yes. Loved the chapter. Loved how he approached her afterward and was okay, looser, more comfortable, and the childhood stories they swapped. Can't stop gushing about this chapter and am eagerly waiting for 'Onward'!