This was one of those stories that doesn't really flow. The part of the story that wasn't dialogue was kind of choppy.

oops wrong author right story sorry! but it was great!

oh that was great, too bad it isn't one of your fav pairings. T.T

this is gorgeous! loved it!

that's so CUTE! FUUGEN/MUFUU ROCKS!

i loved it!

Even though it was moslty dialouge, it worked for the story. Good job, I love this pairing.^_^

Aw! That was a lovely, but cute, conversation!

Wow...that was a new sort of fic! I kind of liked it though. Very in character, but the "slap in the face" thing that Mugen said was a bit much lol. Kinda cute and funny though. Eneded sweetly enough too. Not the best thing I've read, but it was interesting!

that made no sence at all

haha. That was short, sweet, and hilarious as hell. ;) Nice job. I love it.. Good job.

:adds to fave:

i like it! Pleases write more soon!

cute!

Thats so cute!

cute