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| speadee 2007-09-21 ch 1,  | abuseIt's good to know more of what exactly happened. You kept them all in character. It is so like Momoshiro to lose his temper adn get violent. I'm glad it's all settled now. |
| Ventriloquistic Storyteller 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuse*being held back by muses* NO~!! LET ME GO~!! LET ME KILL HIM~! MOMOSHIROU YOU BASTARD~! *strikes scythe dangerously* *glares at muses who backs away; turns to author* It's a wonderful story by the way... so sweet and subtle~ Ike~ Tezuka~!! Poor Fuji... *stares at scythe longingly* *twitches* *turns to Mazuryll* Can I? *turns to author* Let me kill him. I won't forgive anyone who hurts Fuji... including me. -_-" |
| kateriya 2006-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this. I read Tremblor in one sitting, then this piece, and I like how it was in Yuuta's POV. (I have to say that I usually don't read anything Fuji-centric.) I like this epilogue because of the way you brought out the dynamics of Tezuka's friendship with Fuji, as well as the former's sense of responsibility to his team-mates and friends. Tezuka was discreet yet pushy enough and blunt enough, and Fuji was annoyed at people worrying over him even though he needed that reassurance that his friends wouldn't drop him because of a preference. I think the impact of that is more apparent in this piece, than in Tremblor, but that's just me. Nice work! |
| Fightingdreamer5 2005-11-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute! I hope it wasn't a one shot T.T |
| yamatoforever 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI read it over and over! Finally, an appearance from Tezuka! I'm really glad to read his reaction toward Fuji's confession. He had helped Fuji more than he had thought. It's too bad that Momoshiro had reacted too badly over Fuji's confession that he might had interested in boys. Eventhough he had apologized I think Fuji was right, Momo couldn't be comfortable around Fuji anymore. Good story really. ALthough I wish it would be a more clearly TezuFuji. >_< Hope to see your other works soon. |
| Evening Lilacs 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abuseReally good. |
| Valsed 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting history what problems will that bring?? doesn't it end up there, ne?? *_* |
| Queeny 2005-08-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this piece. It got me hook. It's a little too early to critque fully, but keep it up! ^_^ |