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| rite4fun 2007-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseSo, I am completely intrigued and nervous at the same time. This could turn out SOO many ways. :) |
| Ruffle 2006-12-22 ch 6, | abuseluv this story! |
| My-name-is-foxglove 2006-12-21 ch 6, | abuseOh dear a sequel...Well a sequel would be nice but it would kinda ruin the story instead of one great story it'll be a story with a sequel...You decide..I really liked the epilouge! |
| My-name-is-foxglove 2006-12-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I love it! Spies and thieves trust no one! Super Story! Well I might be saying that 60% because I have a soft spot for spies but the other 40% is bacause I like the story. Your not just stating the facts but are slipping them slowly out. Nice. |
| My.Times.Critic 2006-08-27 ch 6, | abusei absoolutely love this story one of my favorites REAL GOOD JOB |
| AnimalGurl55 2006-08-12 ch 2, | abuselike that chapter |
| -88azngrl88- 2006-06-03 ch 6, | abuseur story was awesome! i just stumbled across it...even tho itz benn done months ago...lol! hope u keep updating some of ur other stories also! thanx n a bunch of cookies 2 u too!! |
| pixiepuff101 2006-05-16 ch 6, | abusethis story is really cool. i like the little epilogue that vic writes. |
| RedX'sGirl 2006-04-24 ch 6, | abuseWow this is a late review... I really loved this story and think that a sequel would fit the story. |
| teen freak 2006-04-02 ch 6, | abusewow... |
| Courage Sun 2006-03-25 ch 6, | abuseYaY! KOOL STORY! I can definately imagine Star/Kori and Rachel/Raven being master thieves ^_^. Luv the story ^_^ *puts in fav stories list* |
| Lilyfire 2005-12-30 ch 6, | abuseAwesome, I liked how Victor said the Epoligue. Ni-ice... like one of those awesome what are they called again? ...journals. |
| Flames of the Sun 2005-12-17 ch 6, | abuseThat was so cute! i loved it. It was rushed at times, but I still absolutely adored it. keep it up |
| Deligaris 2005-10-26 ch 6, | abuseWell Aine, it was lots of fun reading your story, do to reasons that it was stuffed with fluff. I'll continued on to your next story which you recomanded at the end of chapter 6. Any way, excellent job! Sincerly Digital-DNA |
| The Last 2005-10-15 ch 6, | abuseYae! Fluffness. Umm... no sequel, I'm thinking. Unless Raven, Kori, Dick and Gar are needed to steal something, and take back their old jobs (thieves and cops) to do whatever it is... Hmm. Maybe the marriages were getting rough and by the end of the sequel everyone's back in love because of near-death experiences or danger or seduction attempts by the enemy? Man, I'm really getting into this! Anyway, if you'd like to possibly follow up on that tangent, e-mail me! I'd love to talk with you about it... if you want to. ^^ Good job. |