Wow. I am very impressed. It is extremely, extremely difficult to bring in an original character into fanfiction and yet you do it and you do it with flair. Airelle is likable, dignified, and yet Snape's character loses nothing by it in comparison. Both come across very strongly in this brief one-shot, and I am definitely intrigued. Their interactions are very believable, understandable, and you seem to have an intelligent, honest grasp of Snape. A romantic relationship with Snape is not an easy one to balance (to say the least!), but it looks like you're quite capable of creating a character to suit him. Very much Wow.

this is.. sad. . ..

really sad.

but really nice too o.o

what can I say? I'm a sucker for stories.

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Gr. ... Gr. -spasmodictwitch-

-cough- I'm good.

I really like Airelle... Poor Vilka! -killsSnapekillsSnape- ...gr... Is all I have to say...

Great writing, personality, and story the whole way through of course! but.. gr.

who angst! I love Snape-fics!

Wonderful ficlet!

Definitely not the question *I* thought of.

Very nice, though... very nicely done!

Yeah! Bring up old Lucius and his wily ways... I love him.

Wow, way to turn a marriage proposal into something drastically different...and slightly scary.

"a child who, at seventeen, had suddenly grown centuries older." WONDERFUL way to end it!

Ah man, what a story. I love your writing. Equal amounts of suspense, angst, a touch of romance and plenty of humor.

Thanks

Stefynae

*sniffles* that was incredibly depressing. great writing though. it grabbed my throat in a death grip. *sniffles again* it as really great. please keep writing.

SNAPE STUPID GIT doesn't he know what Voldemort does to muggle-borns? and Airelle IS a muggle-born BAH he really doesn't value a friendship does he?

wow...that was soo sad. i almost cryed.

Wow ... I'm speechless.

The end actually gave me goosebumps.

Oh gads... beautifully tragic. I must read more!

Oh! That was simply devastating! Great, but devastating! I love it! )

i ahte u make me cry to much (its a joke but u do make me cry way to much) your freaking storeys r to much 4 me

Goodness, this story is so sad... :( I've read it many times (and yet never reviewed...bad Star, bad!) and it always brings me to tears.

You're amazing, Airelle :)

Ciao for now!

-She's a Star, who is anxiously awaiting chapter one of Kavaleria Nox

tears have fallen. I can't see the damn keyboard...