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| ladylaughalot 2006-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseIt's very well written, your style of writing is what makes it intereting because nothing at all occured to advance the plot. The reason for the review is to respectfully request that you write another chapter... There seemed to be a hint at the end that twenty years later Harry would meet the boy again. I think that if this was a prolouge to a story about Harry meeting his thirty year old son, for only the second time ever, and them trying to build a relationship as father and son... THAT would be very interesting. I'm going to put you on my Story alert list, just in case you do decide to do that. |
| Jinxeh 2005-08-18 ch 1, | abuseQuite interesting. It could have been longer and you could have gone into detail with dialogue and such, but still good. ^.^ Excellent. |