Hey,I'm sorry your Dad isn't the same as him.I can't say much about mine cause he left me, my mom , and my brother in Alaska he didn't have enough self pride to say good bye to us.I might make a story about it I'm not sure ,but beleive me mine will end well...not the way my relationship with my dad ended...lectures and bitter words.It hurt's me ,but I just hate him so much...you know ,but all the time's I cried for him...all the time's I've ached for him...I needed him yet he wasn't there.Anway,I liked the first and second make more please.

hey i love your story about kayla its written out really nice! very descriptive keep up the good work!

This was very good. I'm sorry about your real father.

Awwwwwwwwww... The ending was so sweet! _ Can't wait for the next part!

no need for more words than needed

very good. I really like this series and I'm glad more is on the way. just a suggestion, you might want to use the chaptering system. it's fun

This is brilliant! Great story! Can't wait for number 3!

Wow! This one is even better than the first! Keep up the amazing work cause I can't wait to read number three!