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BlueRyuu
2008-09-16 . chapter 1
oh Maria! too good XP hahahaha!
Jessi Tsuki
2007-09-07 . chapter 1
XD Cute!
caiyoko
2006-05-31 . chapter 1
I can't help but go aw, It's very cute, thank you for a sequal, but it's so short ._. AW!
Vaniel
2006-04-30 . chapter 1
More chapters would be a very good thing. It just kinda drops. It's good, but more chapter would make it better.
Basilisk Zero
2006-01-16 . chapter 1
Only one chapter? How disapointing...
Jinva
2006-01-12 . chapter 1
Nice start to your sequel...more, yes?
Lobo Kendo
2005-11-16 . chapter 1
Ugh, I hope my kids aren't like this. Good chapter, and I eagerly await the next.
May
2005-09-22 . chapter 1
lol, i really feel for the others, babysitting three of my mates siblings were enough to make me think of suicide! can't wait to see the trouble the kids give em!
D-chi
2005-09-17 . chapter 1
Wow. ^_^ I almost hate to say this, but can you add another chapter?? It's somehow lacking a denouement... Plus, it's SUPER-FUNNY!
Lucien's Angel87
2005-09-17 . chapter 1
Wow, I've read My Big Fat Aquios Wedding and I have to say this is a very nice sequal. I couldn't stop laughing...so feel free to continue!
Miss Strange
2005-08-31 . chapter 1
hurry up w/ chapt. 2!
Kitsune-Li
2005-08-28 . chapter 1
Heh another great one! I love it. Please continue!
mystriaL-aNgeL
2005-08-28 . chapter 1
Great fic~!! Btw..loved ur first original as well, had to tell you. Update soon~!
DClick, too lazy to log in
2005-08-26 . chapter 1
That was cute~! ^^ And the ending was just too perfect.

I've never been good at actual, yanno, constructive reviews so that's all you get. XD
BlueTrillium
2005-08-22 . chapter 1
Yes! I've been waiting for a sequel ever since I first read the original! It was just as great as I hoped.

And there are all kinds of opportunities for more sequels - you could go back and write the story about Albel's reaction when Nel's first pregnant, or how Mirage (the elder) saved Mirage (the baby) when she was born (that would be a more serious one probably), or something more about the kids learning runology (maybe they set fire to Albel's hair!), or how Maria (and the others) get their revenge for having to babysit, or maybe something with the kids being older and they are actually purposely keeping Nel and Albel from being alone together (or actually helping them get together - and failing?!), etc etc.

So yeah, keep on writing these whenever the muse lets you. And if there's anything at all I can do that would get stuff out sooner, let me know (even if that means only crossing my fingers)! I wish I could write humor...I'm way too serious in my writing...anyway, thanks for another awesome fic.
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