...i thought it was Doctor D... not Doctor Z...

So let's try to interpret images using unfair knowledge because I've been reading your series!

Hmm...
The first one shows where Melany, May, and Ashley were before the story took place?
The second one shows that Melany and May are both in Hoenn?
The third one hints that Groudon and Kyogre both gain the powers of the gems?
The fourth one shows the upcoming battle between Groudon, Kyogre, and Rayquaza? It also shows that May and Melany are going to be assisting Rayquaza?
The fifth one shows Ashely in Kanto who will be fighting the twelve Grand Hunters and capture the Winged Mirages?
...THe sixth one has be stumped, though. It seems to hint that Ashley is going to be facing a powerful pokemon who seems evil, but has a good heart hidden.


Those are my guesses. ^^

So... This is my assumption on the Stone children. You are having Steven be the better battler, while Melany is the one chosen by the Legendaries? Good assumption or bad? just curious.

docter z was docter d in the chapter may battled him

tyrannitar?

wouldn't may have realised she could use the masterball on raikou as soon as she found it in her bag,and not on that salamence?

HOW CAN YOU WRITE SO MUCH?!

regi is spelled with a g,not a j

doesn't kadabra need a trade for evolution

you'd think trained magma grunts would be stronger,as in physcally stronger,than a 12 year old

wouldn't alex be interested in a sableye,considering they don't have any weaknesses

can you insert a character into the story

wouldn't a smart guy like alex have taught his grovyle bullet seed

Seems like Alex should get a sooth bell for skarmory

cute...