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telepop 2008-05-06 . chapter 13
God I want bannock now. Thanks.
Gnomie022 2007-10-10 . chapter 16
I have LOVED LOVED LOVED your stories. I know it's been awhile...but I think you should consider doing another one. Please?
bookworm97 2007-10-01 . chapter 16
that was such a cute story!
it was beautiful.
Areida Rivers 2007-05-09 . chapter 16
Aw, a cute ending. Thanks for wrapping things up! I hope to be seeing new chapters of a new story soon; I've enjoyed reading what you write. Your style is fluid and enjoyable, and your characters are always a blast. Hope you're liking college so far!
Areida Rivers 2007-05-09 . chapter 15
Well, I tried to review chapter fourteen because I hadn't read it in so long, but apparently I already have. Hehe. My comments on fourteen, though... Zander/Xavier = hotness. Much hotness. And I really enjoy that even though Lauren's somewhat dramatic, she's not obnoxious about it. Also, many people in your position, working with Julie as a mute, might have had some serious Mary Sue issues going on, but you've created a very convincing and winsome character. I'm impressed.

Concerning chapter fifteen: The first sentence, I think you mean "poring" rather than "pouring"... hehe. And of course, because I'm a major sap, I have to yell at Xavier: Go get Julie! He's so gorgeous.. pacing around his study... wanting her... being all noble... Man, don't you wish there were more of his type around? LOL... Admit it, you know you were beyond excited when you saw "him" on the bus. Thanks for finishing up, Lulai! I would have been sad without an ending to this one.
cathrine face 2007-04-09 . chapter 16
yeah! I've been so busy I didn't get to finish until today. I loved it. Could have been longer of course but you've got to finish it up eventually i suppose. can't wait for your next one.
namegame 2007-04-06 . chapter 1
This is my favorite of your stories. Well done.
annonymous 2007-03-15 . chapter 5
E! This story (along with all your others =D) is wonderful! I love how Jarrod and Fiona have a little cameo...so cute!
CharlyB 2007-03-07 . chapter 16
THANK YOU for finishing this story. I always enjoy your writing, and it's very frustrating for us loyal readers when we don't get the finished product. However, I can see when you lost interest and maybe that reflected in your writing. It isn't your strongest story or my favorite (that would be a toss up between "Cave of Wonders" and "Dangerous Love" - nevermind, "Dangerous Love" wins. I do like them both A LOT though!:) I liked this story, and you created some fascinating characters that were certainly NOT run-of-the-mill. Good work! I look forward to more of your writing!
smartblondee 2007-03-07 . chapter 16
Thanks for updating! You no longer make me cry myself to sleep but make me want to jump for joy and never want to sleep again I am so excited! I love your writing! Thanks for finishing this story! Start another one soon because now that I have had a taste I am thirsting for more of you stories!
Queen Tabitha Tall 2007-03-03 . chapter 5
I've just go to say that I'm so sorry I didn't catch this story til it was finished!! So good. I'll definitely be looking for new stuff from you.
Lacrymose 2007-03-02 . chapter 5
Gorgeous darling!
nightsoul 2007-02-28 . chapter 14
hi Lulai! Just going back through some of my old favourite authors and stories, and I discovered that you haven't finished this story yet! I read it so long ago, but now that I've found it again I couldn't bear it if it wasn't completed. So please please PLEASE finish it off. You said there're only a couple more chappies, so it couldn't be too much trouble could it?
I loved all your other stories, and I really want to know how you're going to have this one end - I hope it's a happy ending!
luv nightsoul
smartblondee 2007-02-21 . chapter 14
I miss this story so much. You have broke my heart! You tore it to pieces and threw it in a blender the moment you stopped writing this story! Why would you do such a thing? I am going to die because you haven't updated in so long! please update! please! please?
BookRose 2006-11-22 . chapter 14
Okay, it's been so long it's not even funny. If this story is going to be over in a few chapters, why not go ahead and post them. I mean it's almost been a year already. I for one would love to hear the rest of the story cause all your other ones rocked! So when you find the time it'd be so appreciated if you'd update the rest.

@~BookRose~@
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