PLEASE UPDATE! x

You must continue, You must! I am a major byakko fan. it's pathetic. as i said before they are my favorite group And Tatara and Tokaki are my fave. You must continue. ^_^

Sesshykharl

Hey imouto-chan. Just thought I'd drop by and throw in some of my musings. First off, I really liked the personal characterization of Tatara. I know we saw a lot of him in Market, but I like the quiet strength he has and how it hides his loneliness. He's a very cool character, and I'm glad he's getting a bit of screen time with Suzuno.

Ah, and Suzuno herself! Interesting way you bring her into the ShiJin. Seems like every miko that enters is in danger of getting eaten or mauled. Perhaps that's a criteria for being a miko; if you can survive the initial entering into the book, you're a miko.
[The four gods sit at a table, looking down through the clouds onto the earth.
Suzaku: Dammit! That's the third miko that's been eaten by demons! Maybe I should send one in with an AK-47.

Seiryuu: Maybe you should do what I do and actually have someone there to protect her.

Byakko: You're not one to talk, Mister I-Left-A-Miko-To-Drown-In-The-Ocean.

Genbu: You just need a tougher miko. Like mine.

Byakko: Mine could climb trees really well.

Suzaku: Shut up! I swear, this one will be better! *gets Miaka* Aw, **... come on, get eaten! No, Tamahome, don't rescue her! Dammit!]

Hehehe. Sorry, my randomness kicking in. But yeah, I like Suzuno. She's a cool miko, not because she's tough like Takiko, but because she's so level-headed and smart. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.

Please tell me you are going to continue this! Its totally great! ^^

Gyah!! Welcome back Kaze-chan! It's wonderful to see your writing again. But is it just my imagination, or did you post something similar to this before, in Market? ^_^ I could go look, but won't. It reads differently than I remember.

It's interesting, having seen Tatara's character progress through Market, reading him in this piece. You give a peek behind his calm, kind exterior, and surprise the reader with both turmoil and...his mild self-absorption, perhaps? He seems very much in his own world, in a way, here. But I greatly enjoy the way you've portrayed him. Lots of depth. Suzuno also shows a hint of the strenth - and stubbornness - she displays later. It's a strong piece.

Good to have you back!
-Elwing Silme

Yay! More stories from the wonderful and talented Kaze-chan! I'm a huge fan of your origional Market story and it's very nice to see this story coming up. I am hoping for a new addition to Market, as well as more to this. You are a very, very talented writer. The only thing that I have a problem with is that you don't space out your paragraphs. While when you're writing a normal story you shouldn't space out your paragraphs, it's a good idea to do so when posting them on line. Because there is no indents on the web, it makes it much harder to tell where a paragraph ends when you don't space out your paragraphs.

Other than that one thing, this is a wonderful begining to what looks like a great story. I can't wait to read the next instalment of this, and hopefully Market as well!

ah! I am so happy that you are back to writing! I haven't been on in forever, but when I saw your update, I had to return! Please keep it up, I love your stories so much~!