awesome, this story is really good. you potrayed Ai Haibara correctly!

When you mentioned a diamond display, the first thing I thought of was the elusive KID. I have to wonder though, if the note was sent into the public newspaper, why wasn't there a massive mob of screaming fangirls outside the building? Plus, sending the note to a newspaper instead of in person and not making a dramatic appearance in costume to taunt the inspector is not really KID's style. On top of that, there is no way that a man-made gem could be Pandora. My spidey-senses are telling me it is an impersonator. I can't wait to see if I'm right!

sweet story!

This really feels almost like canon, 'cept that there were dead bodies around. XD

I really like these story the two playings you wrote are you going to make any more.

I love this story. It's good to find a Akai fic. Will there be another these soon?

Now we just need an excellent sequel to the excellent sequel.

One thing - I liked your take on the relationship between Shuichi and Shiho. I hope you'll write the sequel I mentioned above so we can see Ai's reaction to the knowledge that 'Shoji' is her brother.

Well, I'm usually rather weary of fics where someone else has been turned into a child...but you pulled it off VERY nicely ^^ Also, Ai suddenly having another sibling, let alone an FBI-type-person was a bit...abstract...But also not bad at all ^^

I especially like these little mysteries, are you planning on doing more? I'd like that...I liked the Kid ^^ But a little dissapointed that Conan wasn't there...

But really, overall you've managed to pull off something truely spectacular in a fic that I'd otherwise not have looked twice at ^^

Awe XD I liked it (I really like the end with Conan whining -lol- that's always great...)

yeys

Oh, what a beautiful way to end a chapter! I'll be looking forward for the update!

The last chapter was really nice. Surprising how they managed the situation, but it's a good thing when something unexpected happens in fanfiction.

I was just wondering one thing... when you wrote "Der Frieschutz" did you mean "Der Freischütz"? It's the only opera with a simular name I know... (or maybe Frieschutz is old german language; as far as I remember that opera was quite old)

well, *that* doesn't look too good of a situation. ANYWAYS!! I LOVE THIS STORY! XD it's great (akai being turned into a kid threw me off though XD)

Please update soon!

Whoa.
I loved how the story turned around like that. You're a really good writer.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Only one review after Chapter 1? Your story deserves more, really... (Why didn't I review after I read the first chapter... ^_^')
I already liked the prequel of this story (That time I reviewed! I think...) and the idea that Shoji and Ai were silblings.

Reviewing is usally to tell the writter what the readers liked and didn't like or to point out mistakes. But I can't find any mistakes nor did I find anything I didn't like. A case without Conan (and/or Kogoro/Heiji/Hakuba) is a little strange, but I love it how Ayumi, Ai and Shoji try to solve the case without those meitantais. If they can survive their discovery, of course. ;)

You're writing style is awesome and I love reading your stories. It's not overly mushy, overly dramatic, or much overly of anything at all. It's well written, very nicely paced and just a great all around read.
As always, I'll be awaiting your next update.