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| fluffypuppykins 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis really feels almost like canon, 'cept that there were dead bodies around. XD |
| Firebullet19 2008-04-01 ch 3, | abuseI really like these story the two playings you wrote are you going to make any more. |
| LambSam 2007-06-14 ch 3, | abuseI love this story. It's good to find a Akai fic. Will there be another these soon? |
| Astarael00 2006-07-06 ch 3, | abuseNow we just need an excellent sequel to the excellent sequel. One thing - I liked your take on the relationship between Shuichi and Shiho. I hope you'll write the sequel I mentioned above so we can see Ai's reaction to the knowledge that 'Shoji' is her brother. |
| Serphenia 2006-05-17 ch 3, anon. | abuseWell, I'm usually rather weary of fics where someone else has been turned into a child...but you pulled it off VERY nicely ^^ Also, Ai suddenly having another sibling, let alone an FBI-type-person was a bit...abstract...But also not bad at all ^^ I especially like these little mysteries, are you planning on doing more? I'd like that...I liked the Kid ^^ But a little dissapointed that Conan wasn't there... But really, overall you've managed to pull off something truely spectacular in a fic that I'd otherwise not have looked twice at ^^ |
| YumeTakato 2005-09-07 ch 3, | abuseAwe XD I liked it (I really like the end with Conan whining -lol- that's always great...) yeys |
| DaisyAnimeluvr 2005-09-06 ch 3, | abuseOh, what a beautiful way to end a chapter! I'll be looking forward for the update! |
| Schillok 2005-09-06 ch 3, | abuseThe last chapter was really nice. Surprising how they managed the situation, but it's a good thing when something unexpected happens in fanfiction. I was just wondering one thing... when you wrote "Der Frieschutz" did you mean "Der Freischütz"? It's the only opera with a simular name I know... (or maybe Frieschutz is old german language; as far as I remember that opera was quite old) |
| YumeTakato 2005-08-27 ch 2, | abusewell, *that* doesn't look too good of a situation. ANYWAYS!! I LOVE THIS STORY! XD it's great (akai being turned into a kid threw me off though XD) Please update soon! |
| Arsene Lup1n 2005-08-27 ch 2, | abuseWhoa. I loved how the story turned around like that. You're a really good writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Schillok 2005-08-27 ch 2, | abuseOnly one review after Chapter 1? Your story deserves more, really... (Why didn't I review after I read the first chapter... ^_^') I already liked the prequel of this story (That time I reviewed! I think...) and the idea that Shoji and Ai were silblings. Reviewing is usally to tell the writter what the readers liked and didn't like or to point out mistakes. But I can't find any mistakes nor did I find anything I didn't like. A case without Conan (and/or Kogoro/Heiji/Hakuba) is a little strange, but I love it how Ayumi, Ai and Shoji try to solve the case without those meitantais. If they can survive their discovery, of course. ;) |
| Clamowamo 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseYou're writing style is awesome and I love reading your stories. It's not overly mushy, overly dramatic, or much overly of anything at all. It's well written, very nicely paced and just a great all around read. As always, I'll be awaiting your next update. |