Um... if i'm not mistaken, i think La Vida Loca was named Sofi. but aside from that...Bobby was a little out of character. good job though. =]

Just letting you know that Angel's girlfriend, La Vida Loca is called Sophie not stephanie. good story though, but chapters could be a bit longer.

i like ur story and i can't wait to read more ur pretty good at it^_^

That was awsome! I really hope you continue it, can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey I love your story and I am always willing to help be a beta to fellow writers. But I have one edit to your story Angel's girl is Sophie not Stephanie. I don't know if it was on purpose or accidental but it’s your story and it rocks.

Ok, so you probably know that I've read all the chapters already, but I came back to this one just to say...PLEASE UPDATE THIS GREAT STORY! Thanks! :)

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No, you're not slow, I'm just inpatient when it comes to a good story! =) Anyway, so happy to see those two together, can't believe Bobby forgave her, wow! Oh, and it works really well without the car chase, I couldn't have predicted her rolling out of the car! It was nice to see Bobby showing some emotion when he thought she died, great job! Please update soon! =)

that. was. AWESOME! I loved it! The chase was great! And Bobby was so stupid, thinking she was dying. I can't wait until next chapter!

~Ginny

ah, she's been kidnapped! um... why would somebody kidnap her? oh, to kill her because she didn't do her job... right-o! Can't wait til next chapter! This one was awesome! Come to think of it, the whole story is! Keep it up!

~Ginny

Yes! An update! Thanks so much, this one was another awesome chapter! I can't believe she knew, and Bobby still loves her, wow! You really need to get those two back together somehow! This was really good to begin with and then you threw in an upcoming car chase! Oh boy! Please update soon! =)

update soon with a longer chapter please

that was Good!

I can't believe April is another contract killer?! Wow! Still, I think I'd like for her and Bobby to end up together! Did she really know about Evelyn's death--maybe her boss didn't tell her everything before it happened? Well, anyway, you're doing an unbelievable job with this, so I'd love for you to update this, pretty please! =)

That was... unexpected. I would've never thought April was out to kill them! Damn, that complicates things a bit. Hey, you know what would be great? An update! That would be awesome, so can you please?

~Ginny